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  1. Hm. Maybe Rose Petal will 'recruit' you like she herself was recruited. Heh, heh. Kidnapping. But yeah, seriously, Rose could be the one to introduce you.

     

    Sure! I'd like to meet her in the roleplay. You might need to know the location, because if Jade is "recruited" in the same way as Rose Petal, they'd have to be near each other. Jade will probably be coming to the forest from the direction of New Ponyville, so near the far right end of the Ghastly Gorge.

  2. Thanks and you don't have to have a house or exactly lean towards one, myself I have an OC that is a 'non-faction' as I call them (Stardream the Seer), but yes picking a house is encouraged. We actually have two non-factions/wanderers total, Iron Hoof and Stardream.

     

    Honestly, I'd like to have a house, Jade's just working on getting there. She'll be (hopefully) at House Everfree within a few hours of when the roleplay starts. Well, she'll be in the Everfree Forest by then.

  3. "Eat Gallifrey, you say?"

     

    the Doctress took out a plate of freshly baked crumpets, one of which had been somehow baked as a miniature model of Gallifrey by the insane magics running rampant in the Doctress' admittedly badly managed narrator closet handbag.

     

    "Odd, I meant to pull out a TARDIS with a replica of Gallifrey in it. But this will do nicely."

     

    Inexplicably acquiring a full cup of tea, the Doctress set the crumpets down on a randomly appearing endtable and sat in an equally randomly he appearing chair and proceeded to have some tea.

     

    River stared at the crumpets. The replica was so perfect - every detail was correct. It reminded her of the pain of her beloved at the planets' explosion, how troubled he always was because of it. Rivers' eyes started to water, but she quickly masked her sadness, smiled, and said, "These look lovely." As she walked off sipping tea and eating crumpets, she made a small, inaudible cry.

     

    The Doctress had already been whisked away, however, so River was not heard. It struck her that the Doctress and The Doctor are both total blabbermouths. Hopefully The Doctress' babbling would start to make sense too.

  4. Could you relink me your OC's bio, I can't seem to remember where you have posted it last. Thank you

     

    Sure! This is the link: http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/jade-r2055  I think I'll put it in my signature to make it easier.

     

    If this is being split up into sections and such, will we be put into new ones depending on location? My OC is traveling, so I'm just curious as to how it all happens. Sorry if you've already explained it, I'm too tired to really pay too much attention to these posts.

  5. Yusuke hunched over and sighed. "Two new matches and I'm not in any of them. I'm all by my lonesome out here. If I have to go to this stupid tournament, at least give me a damn fight!"

     

    (OOC: Dumbledore would be the best match out of the people left, but anyone would do.)

     

    "Not entirely by yourself," River said. "After all, I'm here." Twirling her sonic screwdriver in the air, River hummed an odd tune. Stopping abruptly, she said, "It's too dark in here." She pressed the button on her screwdriver, pointing it at the lights, turning them on. I may have just made a fatal mistake for the sake of proper lighting, she thought to herself. Oh well. I'm hungry. "Is there any tea? Crumpets? I'm so hungry I could eat Gallifrey."

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  6. "Yes, my story seems to be a rather popular one tonight," Dumbledore says, eyes twinkling. "And I do not believe young Miss Rowling has quite completed the stories of his schooltime activities yet, so I really cannot say, can I?"

     

     

    (OOC: Am I saying his eyes twinkle too often?) (OOC: Arrow to the knee. Had to be done. Bravo, Aragorn.)

     

    "No, I suppose you can't, not really. You know, I honestly don't want to fight you, don't want untold strength, but most definitely want a memory of this. Who do you think you'll end up fighting?" I hope he doesn't die - he seems rather sweet, really.

     

    (OOC: Just a bit much, yes)

  7. (OOC: Oh snap. And Dragonborn was just given a gun.)

     

    Dumbledore subconsciously wished the Ranger luck in his battle. He had seemed most pleasant. He walked over to the newly alone River Song, and said, "I apologise, but I could not help overhearing you saying that you are also a professor. My name is Albus Dumbledore." Extending his hand as he had so many times before, he glanced with concern on his face at the two battles currently waging on the holograms.

     

    Hello, Albus. I am very familiar with your story." Shaking his hand, she continued; "I am a professor of archaeology. I've always had an . . . interest in the past, present, and future. Why, I myself was recently in the past, and it was very interesting indeed. So Mr. Dumbledore do tell me, what is your favorite Harry Potter book?"

  8. The Game Master abruptly appeared in the training room and looked around. "Looks like you are really all here," he said before snapping his fingers. "ARAGORN," The familliar metalic voice said as he was transported to some ancient ruins. "DRAGONBORN," it continued sending him along as well.

     

    The exit to the room Claus was in opened upon approach to reveal a long hallway.

     

    Oh, what a pity. I was so looking forward to talking with that Aragorn boy about that language and his peculiar choice in weaponry. Well, I guess it's time to see what that sword can really do." In a couldn't-care-less sort of way, River watched the match out of the corner of her eye. "When will this get exciting?"

  9. Aragorn decided to break his silence, walking to great the new comer to the battle. " Not idle do I see a woman in combat, though I have seen my fair share. You seem less than prepared for what you are certain to face, do not mistake my concern for foul judgement." Aragorn slipped away his long pipe and lowered his hood,revealing his gruff and unkempt face.

     

    "Nathlo i nathal. Im Aragorn estar. Man i eneth gîn?" Aragorn gave a shallow bow. "May I ask of you your name?"

     

    "Hello, I am Professor River Song. Now, what language was that? Normally all languages are translated in my head, but this one was not. It is either ancient beyond compare or unique to your universe, and I am indeed curious." Glancing at Aragorns' weapons, she inquired, "Is that all you've brought?"

  10. Bored of firing into the void and having dispatched more imaginary crystals carried by equally imaginary miniature Cthulhus than she felt like caring about, the Doctress swerveteleportedwhatever over to Aragorn, narrowly avoiding clipping the Dragonborn.

     

    "Don't you know smoking's bad for you?" the Doc said nonchalantly, gently fading back into existance against some randomly located wall next to Aragorn.

     

    (OOC: If he's is standing nowhere near the edge of the room, presume Doccy pulled the wall out of nowhere herself.)

     

    Sensing one in the association of a Gallifreyan, the Doctress popped back out and in of existence just in time to catch the arrival of River Song through a portal located conveniently in the sunset. Weeping Angel logic right there, but she'd not be the one to complain.

     

    "About time you showed. You missed a whole match!" she said excitedly, a childish rush coming along. "In fact, Spidey's still fighting Dashie and then there was a fight in the training room then the Psynergist defeated Porky's minion or something andyoushouldliketotallyjust-"

     

    The Doctress exploded into confetti and powerups for a second before reforming from the confetti and putting the powerups in the handbag.

     

    "Sorry, I had a rush for a second there. Happens randomly when I don't discharge enough dislogic every now and then."

     

     

    Dante sighed as he grabbed Rebellion. "Can you please shut up? I don't like anyone who has a bigger mouth them mine." Shes worse then Jester, he at least was fun to kill but I'm not sure about her. Dante walked over to the Doctress and the new comer. "And what is your name?"

     

    Smiling a bit, River introduced herself. "Professor River Song." Addressing the Doctress, she said; "Sweetie, you'll need to talk slower. I apologize for my absence. I traveled to 1934 and got home a few hours later than intended, so I got the letter late." Gazing at the battle, Rivers eyes opened up a bit with amusement at the battle. "So the man in the ridiculous costume is fighting a magical pegasus? Well, I'll be Cleopatra. I actually was once. Quite interesting really."

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  11. Remember Matilda is the Smiling Doll, trapped in agony and pain, going insane because of becoming one. I was simply thinking that part of her still recognized Jade, and she was both moving forward to seek comfort and holding herself back knowing she could hurt her daughter.

    A word of warning, if Jade ever meets her mother again the Smiling Doll will attack without hesitation as at that point her mother would be completely lost in her endless pain and suffering. If any of the ponies I will be controlling are there with Jade when this happens they will likely tell her to kill the Smiling Doll that was once her mother... or tell her that they will do it if she doesn't.

     

    No I don't think they would

     

    Yes but make what edits you were going to d first.

     

     

    I was planning on making changes to fit into what you were saying, but it seems to fit now - Jade wasn't hurt too bad because of her mother holding the doll back (and the doll is stuck rusting in a shed until some idiot lets her out). Jade probably would manage to kill Matildas' doll herself (with much effort), but would be further scarred and, depending on the timing, push off the edge.

     

    So wait, can Jade keep her name then?

     

    Yeah, I had a feeling that the Laughing Cult wouldn't do that, but it was worth a shot.

     

    Now is the bio. officially done?

  12. *Snatches note off of the table* "This was sent . . . how long ago? Oh dear." *Starts reading* "Hmm, let's see . . . chosen to be . . . hmmshmmsumm . . .  I see. Well, this interferes with my plans for tea, but I suppose I could miss it for a multiversally important tournament." *Grabs sonic screwdriver and runs off into the portal*

     

    "Sorry I'm late! Someone sent it after I traveled back a few decades from the present, and I returned a few hours after, and I took a while longer to notice the note. My name is Professor River Song, Archaeologist. And you all are?" *Looks at Spiderman and makes a few chuckling noises at his costume*

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  13. Okay, take your time. I honestly don't think any changes need to be made.

     

    Now you don't need to add more detail to the bio. I assumed that part of the reason why Jade was not harmed to bad is because what little of her mother's mind was left had her hold back a bit. On whether or nor Smiling Dolls can see... I think it would be interesting to say they 'see' through vibrations, sound, voices, exc.

     

    On Mythos, I can see what you mean but him having a special watch was before I ever watched Doctor Who... so probably happened by chance.

     

    I thought maybe saying that Matilda held the doll back would be too far-fetched, but that was my original idea, and I'm glad it works - I really think it's good. And I like the idea of Smiling Dolls' way of "seeing". And just out of curiosity, would The Laughing Cult tickle people until they laugh so hard they can't breathe and then they suffocate to death? Because that would be so cool.

     

    Wait, if you say I don't need to change it, does that mean my pony has been . . . approved???

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  14. TheSonicAlicorn, I enjoyed reading your bio. You did well and you created amazing and believable reasoning for Jade to hate the Cult of Laughter. Though a small thing to note is that for Jade's mother to have become a Smiling Doll... she would have had to be a member of the Cult of Laughter or at least working closely with them and at one point tried to turn away from or betraying the cult. Those are the conditions for a pony to be made into a Smiling Doll, being a traitor. Which also bring into question Jade's father, of though he may not have been a member he would possibly have had a connection with the cult. Lastly, Jade was lucky to get out of her house alive... even more so with so little injures. By all accounts she should have died or at least been badly injured as Smiling Dolls are fast, if I remember correctly faster then most ponies.

     

    Also, Jade isn't exactly a pony name, or more not by itself... for one because no pony has only a single syllable making up their name. They normally have three syllables in their name, sometimes two or four syllable. Not only that but from what I have seen ponies normally have a name that connects to their Special Talent, skills, interest, or even appearance. The name isn't a big thing though, and all in all I can't really see much to complain or worry about when it comes to your OC. Though one question is which of the Houses does your character even loosely support, or is she without a House? (P.S. None-unicorns can join House Moon and Star, and while pegasus and earth ponies are often treated as lesser not all the unicorns of the House would treat them badly.)

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    No Mythos isn't based on the Master, though you have now made me interested in knowing why you think he does. (I know only a bit about the Master when he made an appearance during the time the tenth Doctor first discovered him. There there was the whole plotline of 'taking over the world'. The Drums of War.

     

    Just to let you know, when I say I'm really thoroughly done, I'm not even close, but I'm done for the day. I will never be done nitpicking.

     

    About the smiling doll, I have a plan with somepony that will explain why she is a smiling doll, but if I told you it would be SUCH a spoiler. I do know Jade shouldn't have gotten out alive, but . . . oh, I'l change it somehow so it fits. But before I do, can Smiling dolls see well in the dark?

     

    I think you read this bio before my edit. In part of it I titled the "Afterword" for lack of a better name, it explains where / to what house  Jade will go. (She doesn't know earth ponies can be in Moon and Star, since she never got the info.)

     

    I understand that it's not exactly the best pony name, but don't some people have strange names too? I don't want to argue, but I like her name, and I'd rather not change it, if that's okay with you. If I must change it though, then I will, but I'd like to be sure I can't keep it the same first. What if I added a last name? And am I the only person who finds it bizarre that the parents name their kids based on their cutie mark when nobody knows what the cutie mark going to be?

     

    I thought Mythos was based on The Master because of their source of power; The Master found a pocketwatch at a young age, and it cursed him with images reminding him of what he was - A Timelord. Also, they both lost the only accepting woman of them in their state of insanity, but it was for different reasons, and The Master didn't care.

     

    Thanks for the feedback!

  15.  King Elessar Telcontar, Estel, Longshanks, Thorongil, Strider, Wingfoot, Dúnadan, Stick-at-naught Strider.

     

    You can just call me Aragorn.

     

    Aragorn! Yes, the guy in Lord of the Rings, no? Some kinda' prince, right? King? In love with an elf. Well, I've only seen part of the first movie (want to see and read more), so I'm not too sure about him. It's too bad you aren't RPing as Eragon (or better yet, his dragon). Still, want to be allies? We help each other until the end, and then a battle to the death! Either that, or one of us doesn't make it. Deal?

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  16. I also forgot to mention it has a red setting. This allows it to function without signal interference. For example, if someone cast a spell that disabled the screwdriver, the red setting is still active. It's just a change from a blue diode to a red diode.

     

    Oh, I'd always wondered what that setting did. Thanks! Again . . . again. Want to be alliances? (Is that what you were angling for?) But before that happens, who are you being in the tournament?

     

     

     

    stop giving the enemy helpful useful information! you don't want them to have an unfair advantage!

     

    Hush.

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