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BizzarePony

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  1. I'm terribly sorry to add to your already swamped queue, but if you wouldn't be inconvenienced, I would like to have an avatar that combines Derpy Hooves and The Legend of Zelda.... If that's alright with you...

  2. Interesting. I have only forayed into GURPS myself, but never seriously. I did play D&D once, though (involving in some really nasty punishments by the DM). It seems that this would be rather fun. I think I'll try and follow this thread...

  3. I apologize in advance.

     

    If you want to HONESTLY know what I think, then click the spoiler. Or, you can take the blue pill and just move on. Your call.

     

     

    I... Give it a 3.8 out of 5. My reasoning? Here it is.

    1. It's a tad cliched, concerning the human part.

    2. The shipping just doesn't feel natural enough.

    3. The characters seem somewhat 2-dimensional, and Gary has no backstory to speak of.

    Other than that, it wasn't bad, and I kind of enjoyed it. So, there's definite room for improvement, but you did a good job. Don't take any of this personally, it's just that over analyzing things is a nasty habit of mine.

     

  4. Very, very good. I enjoy the episodic nature of the story, which incidentally happens to be my favorite kind of fanfiction. The characterization is near perfect, with the (VERY) slight exception of Pinkie, but she's a very difficult character to pull off anyway, so you did a very good job. I did get a feeling that it was a tad rushed and the foreshadowing was a tiny bit forced, but other than that, very good work. I know I am being rather critical here, but A) That's just who I am, and B ) Constructive criticism is a good thing. All in all, I loved it. I can't wait to see more of your work.

  5. Before you ask if I'm just stealing an idea from Finesthour,

    Yes. Yes I am.

     

    However, I think it will give me good experience as a writer, and will just be generally fun for all of us. Don't expect Shakesperian quality, though.

     

    So, send in your (NO RULE 34) ideas, and I'll try to get to them as soon as I can. Also, shipping is ok, but discouraged, as I don't tend to read that sort of thing, and would end up writing a story that would look like it was written by Sweetie Belle. In other words, horrible. Comedy and adventure are also good possibilities, along with sci-fi. If you want sad or grimdark, I suppose that works too.

     

    Let's see how this turns out!

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