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Posts posted by BizzarePony
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Intriguing... Go on.
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This is the first time that I have attempted to produce a song with FL Studio, as the title would suggest. Please, listen to it and give me some feedback!
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The Bizarre Pony X Twilight Sparkle
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Please, can somepony give me an idea?
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Brilliant! Derpy is my favorite pony, and that drawing would take me DAYS to replicate! I love it!
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Rainbow dash grinned.
"The one and only! So, Applejack, who are these ponies, I mean... Whatever they're called... Yeah. I've never seen them before."
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1.) Becoming popular
2.) Winter Wrap Up
3.) Find a Pet
4.) E18: The Crusaders' Theme (BGM)
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I'm terribly sorry to add to your already swamped queue, but if you wouldn't be inconvenienced, I would like to have an avatar that combines Derpy Hooves and The Legend of Zelda.... If that's alright with you...
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I have an EXTREMELY basic understanding of French, due to 3 months of that class in school. The language that I really want to learn is Japanese, though. I've always personally been fascinated with languages, and would also maybe like to try to pick up Latin at some point.
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Interesting. I have only forayed into GURPS myself, but never seriously. I did play D&D once, though (involving in some really nasty punishments by the DM). It seems that this would be rather fun. I think I'll try and follow this thread...
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Dash burst out of the door nearest to the group of ponies and ran up to them, looking rather smug, as she always did.
"Hey guys, sorry I'm late! Whoa, who are you guys?"
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7.5/10. Great lyrics and video, but the vocals and backing music were average.
Now THIS is a song.
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As soon as you put out a little more backstory, I'm in.
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I apologize in advance.
If you want to HONESTLY know what I think, then click the spoiler. Or, you can take the blue pill and just move on. Your call.
I... Give it a 3.8 out of 5. My reasoning? Here it is.
1. It's a tad cliched, concerning the human part.
2. The shipping just doesn't feel natural enough.
3. The characters seem somewhat 2-dimensional, and Gary has no backstory to speak of.
Other than that, it wasn't bad, and I kind of enjoyed it. So, there's definite room for improvement, but you did a good job. Don't take any of this personally, it's just that over analyzing things is a nasty habit of mine.
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Very, very good. I enjoy the episodic nature of the story, which incidentally happens to be my favorite kind of fanfiction. The characterization is near perfect, with the (VERY) slight exception of Pinkie, but she's a very difficult character to pull off anyway, so you did a very good job. I did get a feeling that it was a tad rushed and the foreshadowing was a tiny bit forced, but other than that, very good work. I know I am being rather critical here, but A) That's just who I am, and B ) Constructive criticism is a good thing. All in all, I loved it. I can't wait to see more of your work.
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I really like this poem's quality,
I honestly can say I think it's great!
I'm a poet too, as you can see,
And I think that your work is just first rate.
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Write one of the above ideas, but add plot twists to the point of ridiculosity.
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Before you ask if I'm just stealing an idea from Finesthour,
Yes. Yes I am.
However, I think it will give me good experience as a writer, and will just be generally fun for all of us. Don't expect Shakesperian quality, though.
So, send in your (NO RULE 34) ideas, and I'll try to get to them as soon as I can. Also, shipping is ok, but discouraged, as I don't tend to read that sort of thing, and would end up writing a story that would look like it was written by Sweetie Belle. In other words, horrible. Comedy and adventure are also good possibilities, along with sci-fi. If you want sad or grimdark, I suppose that works too.
Let's see how this turns out!
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Banned because SURPRISE! I'm back.
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9/10 I see you in QUITE a few places around the forum.
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What's the estimated release date?
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That intro was YOU? I saw that on YouTube randomly and loved it! Nice work!
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Banned for having the thousandth post.
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Pizza with beef on it.
Why does Skyward Sword get criticized for not adding enough to the series while MW3 gets praised by the same critics? (Nerd rage)
Find a Pet - Cover
in Miscellaneous Fan Art
I approve! Actually, in all honesty, I had no idea you were female until I watched this... I'm impressed by your vocals, to be sure.