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  1. @@arkman575, @@Bada3oom Box, @@Firehearted,

     

    Bliss could just make out Seth's growling and Boom's clever sarcastic back talk out in the hallway...but it only aided in making her shake in terror, paralized and ashamed to do anything. Seth was on his own she realized...too afraid and too stupid to help him to save her own skin. What could I do? She sobbed into her hooves, she's a vampire...a natural vampire...something I never actually faced before! She's too smar too...she's probably hundreds of years old for all I know...compared to her i'm just a foolish filly with a wolf for a friend...

     

    Her sobbing grew louder though as she went against her own thoughts and wepply rose from the bed and poked her head out her room, to observe the scene unfold. "S-Seth...?" She called to him as he continued to bare his teeth, "what...what are you going to do...? Come back in here where its safe!" She shuddered back slightly as she saw the familiar flicker of red cross Boom's eyes...She was in defense mode now....and looking more menacing then before. She also quickly caught eyes with Atlas then...his eyes full of revenge and anger...making her drop her ears back in shame, sniffing badly. "I'm sorry Atlas...I'm so sorry!" She cried out staring at the floor, tremmbling.

  2. @@Bada3oom Box,

     

    I still can't help but feel scared by it all though. See I don't like the idea of being a vampire, I love to eat, I love the sun, I love being a happy blissful alicorn lol.

     

    Lover where your going with this though, I just feel like Panama hasn't gotten enough fun in the RP and its his time to shine or show off, get scary vampire face on! lol

     

    @@Firehearted,

    Aww sorry dude... didn't mean to, just all part of the game. Besides it works to Boom's favor!

  3. @@Firehearted,

     

    She could hear you through the wall, you know, really big ears she has and all, and she could hear quite a bit. She didn't like the sound of your enthusiasm, gotta admit it made her worry lol.

     

    @,

     

    NOOOOOOOOO you shall not be ignored!

     

    @@Bada3oom Box,

     

    Come on Boom! Don't ignore your first vampire! He's lonely lol, maybe take Atlas and go see Sidewinder about his transformation, they can chat about his experience *squee*

  4. @@Firehearted,@@arkman575,

     

    "I...wait please!" She called out to Atlas but it was already too late, the pegasus stormed out, flinging his notes into her room as he left. Did I assume too much...? She asked herself.

     

    Of course you did, you are stupid after all... A dark memory stroked her conciousness, making her shake her head.

     

    Gah...stop it Bliss...don't...don't let it get to you. She slammed her door shut, locking it at the same time then fluttered to her bed to sob while Seth spoke to her.

     

    Great...just great, she thought to herself as he coaxed her best he could, you just insulted, probably even hurt... the only pony out of the others that was on your side...and you had to go and accuse him of betrayl? What where you thinking? She could hear her father's words echoing in the back of her mind, calling her a dumby for assuming so much like she usually did. You're an alicorn princess for Celesita sake! You're supposed to be careful when talking to others...you should know better then that... Now you've put everypony at risk by your own thick headed arrogance and fillish fears! "OH!" She cried into her pillow, sobbing loudly, not caring if Seth or any of the others heard. "I'm such a fool!" She curled up into a ball, pulling her cloak off the rack and hiding under it, praying that the storm would let up. "Wait till the storm passes...then...then just go...take Seth and go..." she sobbed quietly under her ears and wings, admist to the cape...feeling ashamed and wallowing in her own foolishness as Seth spoke to her, trying to calm her down.

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  5. @@Pripyat Pony,

     

    She smiled she and Clover had something in common, "Well then that makes two of us. I just hate it when I'm addressed formally all the time. Princess Celestia though tends to lecture me about embracing my title and to quit avoiding her when it comes to 'magic lessons'." She shrugged, "she just doesn't consider that I have my own life to live and that I'm doing well and fine on what the magic I know and understand. I don't need to know how to 'raise the sun'" She added the last sentence sarcastically before giving a rough laugh.

     

    @,

     

    "I really only know a few basics," she turned to Blaze then, "Teleporting, levitating about 10 objects depending on the size. I can make a protective shield for a short period of time... Oh and this one time when I...turned myself accidently into a stallion and two of my friends into mares...The spell was meant to turn an orange into an apple..." She paused for a second, then once more laughed at the comedy of it all, "I know it's silly! But you either laugh or cry right? Let me re-introduce myself, without formalities *clears her throat and stands up*, Hello Blaze and Clover, my name is Lightning Bliss. I live up in an isolated area of the mountains just outside Ponyville with my husband. I make my living as a store owner for my personal arts and crafts. Sadly its not doing as well as I would have hoped. That's the whole reason why this message on the board caught my attention." She pointed to it, "what about you two?"

  6. @, @@Pripyat Pony,

     

    Her blushing didn't tone but it did reflect his charming comments on her physical apprence. "Thank you, that's most appreciated Prince, though I think you might have heard embellished rumors of about my powers," she rubbed her head and smiled gleefully as he turned to address himself to Princess Clover. Not wanting to be rude herself anymore then she already wasin her mind, she took another deep breath and turned to the alicorn Clover. "Hi, it's nice to meet you in the flesh Princess Clover. Forgive me if... I don't know much of you or your tributes... I kinda tend to hide out in my home with my husband Night Lights. Hard to do though when other kingdoms summon me to help with negotiations and peace treaties though, "she snorted at the reatlity of her duties, "you'd think if I were better at magic I could just make myself disappear- oh..." she blushed in embrassment then, the cat leapt out of the bag on that one. Stupid Blissy...you had to mention you don't know squwat about magic too?

  7. All these responses are helping me greatly, this is my first OC I'm writing that is actually meant to be a 'villian' problem is I don't do villians very often.

     

    This character is based off two people from real life, sadly I don't know their personal experience to emphansize on why they were cruel to me in the first place.

     

    The bully side of things, he always picked on me for how I looked, so here lies the ideal that he will do anything to upstage Lightning Bliss every chance he gets, which isn't too hard cause he's mastered in his magical talents, she barely understands the basics.

     

    Though I can see the critics here that he's "too" bad, and not enough good. So i'll re-edit his back story some to shake off all that bad stuff, and create a reason for why he went down the dark path to begin with.


    @, @,

     

    Ok so I re-edited a few things and I think he sounds alot better, what do you two think?

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  8. @, @@Pripyat Pony,

     

    (OOC glad to see we're making friends? lol sorry im not used to chatting with other alicorn OCs)

     

    Her face went red with embrassement as Prince Blaze approached her, speaking her name. Horse apples...how did he know it was me? This cape isn't doing its job... She sighed heavily and peered out from under her hood, her pink goggles glistening under a lamp light, "Who me...?" She tried to cover, "I'm no...Princess...I'm just your average, run of the mill...um...unicorns?" She quickly tucked her wings under her cape but realized there was no point in hiding the obvious. "Gah...sorry, I just don't like to be noticed for my alicorn tributes...kinda bad enough with these big things," she gestured to her large ears that poked out and tossed her hood off her head, "and this tail of mine," she wagged her gryphon tail. "I don't see other alicorns around much...I guess you could say I feel rather awkward around them."

  9. So after hitting hard times and recently getting inspired on my orginal OC Lightning Bliss, moving to a new location outside Ponyville (due to unfortuent events involving her arch rival) I decided to make another OC to be her nemesis.

     

    And here he is!

     

    Chase Razor

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    Here's his character sheet: http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/chase-razor-r6598

     

    I would appreciate any feed back, compliments or critics on his developement. Again he's supposed to be Lightning Bliss's rival, or bully. Like Trixie is to Twilight hehe.

     

    Thanks and look forward to hearing from ya'll!

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  10. So it's been awhile since I posted any new artwork on here, I've been busy with RL problems and taking requests from my store. But on that note here are some of my recent works.

     

    This is a new OC for my OC thread of Lightning Bliss

     

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    And this is a new actual OC I created, a rival for Lightning Bliss, I call him Chase Razor, he's also in my signature. (I would appreciate feed back on his character sheet!)

     

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  11. @@Polaris, @@arkman575,

     

    (OOC Ok since Wayzer is really busy with school, I'm gonna divert the captain so Seth and Polaris will have to fight him ok? Ok here we go!)

     

    The Captain grew annoyed with this relentless shadow chase where he was gaining no ground...when it dawned on him. This unicorn ain't tryin' t' escape...nor be he tryin' t' fight me...he's tryin' t' distract me? He stopped suddenly, perking his ears up and looked towards the sky. He could see his gryphon Jewel being viciously occupied by the looks, by the escaped blue pegasus doctor...and Fang, Sab and Billy were no where to be found. "Blast it all! The prinsoners have escaped...? THE PRINCESS!" He suddenly realized the stupidity of himself and darted out of the galley, running at full gallop back towards his cabin.

     

    -- At the cabin --

     

    Bliss quickly rolled up the scroll then found a candle and lit it with the heat of her glowing horn. Then lightly she dipped the melted wax on the scroll to seal it shut just as Princess Celestia showed her, while quickly stampping her hoof print into the wax to leave her mark. Once the wax was cooled and sealed the scroll shut, she levitated the nearest port hole window open, and focused her magic on the scroll for delievery. "Please...get to Night Lights safetly...you are only hope little scroll..." Her horn glowed and then abruptly zapped the scroll into nothing but a rainbow smoke...and quickly gusted out the window...just as a door was attempted to being bucked down.

     

    "PRINCESS LIGHTNING BLISS!" She heard the captain bellow outside his door, "YOU AND I NEED TO HAVE A CHAT LITTLE POPPET!"

     

    "Oh gods..." she quickly darted under his bed, grabbing her tail in the process to hide it better, just as the door was kicked down. She held her breath, stopped her shaking, and waited...

     

    "I know ye be here Princess...I can smell yer fear..." Slit snorted as he stomped towards the bed and slowly peeked under it, spotting the shaking white mare easily, "ahoy Princess...COME OUT OF THERE!" He scrapped to grabbing her hoof but missed by inches.

     

    She squealed in terror and backed herself as far under the bed as possible, praying somepony would come to her aid.

     

    -- In the Northern Mountains of the Wyvern Dragon clans --

     

    Nights laid on his makeshift trove of gems and gold his mother had stowed away for him personally to lay on while he spent his time visiting her. Both were enjoying their second helping of gems for dinner and enjoying the silence of the cold blowing winds of the mountains...when suddenly a rainbow puff of smoke appared in front of the black dragon's face. The smoke floated in front of him, seeming to inspect who he was, before finally turning into a solid object, shapped like a scroll, rematieralize and fall to the ground in front of him.

     

    "What is that?" Pyra asked her son as he reached for the note, a clear frown was on his face before he even opened it.

     

    "It's a letter from Bliss..." he answered her, "that's odd, she shouldn't be home yet..." He unrolled the scroll as gently as he could with the tips of his claws and carefully read the message...His face turned to one of terror...then into snarling anger...then back into fear and sadness, all within a matter of seconds of each other. Then he slammed his talons on the ground, and rose from his trove, heading towards the cave entrance.

     

    "Nights??? What's going on? Tell me my son, I'll help in any way I can!" The red wyvern female rose up to follow him, quickly stretching her wings out, taking off after him abruptly before he had time to answer her.

     

    "We have to get to the Gryphon Empire mother!" Nights snarled and quickly roared out in dragon tongue for three other dragons to follow him and his mother, "The Princess of Peace has been captured...our friends have been catpured... My wife...is in danger!" It was more then enough for him to say as he lead the party of 4 dragons including his mother, South west of the North towards the Gryphon lands...time was of the urgency.

  12. @@Firehearted, @@arkman575,

     

    "Seth...? What's going on? What do you mean?" She sat down next to her wolf comrade out of comfort for himself as well as for her own security...far as she was concerned, she was a trapped mouse in a cage...with a two tigers. Then quite abruptly, Atlas came into the door, asking how they were doing.

     

    "Not good Atlas...Seth knows..." she glared at him firmly then before continuing, "and I know what you and Boom have been talking about... Why don't you just let her turn you before she gets to me and Seth? Since you love learning about vampires so much!" She snorted at him, her horn glowing out of instinct in a fight or flee sparkle of insinctual magic. "Here we are, trapped with two vampires in this god forsaken cabin, in the middle of a blizzard, and you are too caught up with a book on the very thing that is hunting us down!"

     

    She started to hyperventilate again, not more giving into anger, but terror as she pressed herself up against Seth for better protection. "I'm so scared...I'm so scared Seth...I don't want to be Blight again...I don't want to die...I don't want to kill others...not again!"

  13. Its truely awsome and I'm enjoying this RP too especially after talking with Boom about where to take this RP with her being the dominant vampire here.

     

    If ya'll like to hear?

     

    Basically Boom has discovered a prophecy of turning her into a royal vampire, kinda like an alicorn but for vampires and NO HORN, and involves her drinking the blood of an alicorn (it can be any alicorn) and sadly I'm the only alicorn in the house lol.

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  14. Bliss didn't realize how many ponies would quickly show up to view the same messsage as she was. To be honest she didn't really understand it herself why she would pay any interest in the note, her curiosity of payment merely got the better of her. Though money was never short with her and Nights, her art store wasn't doing as well as it should, and she was determined to get the money on her own without her husbands' help. There was no harm for her in sticking around what this 'job' was about, far as she was concerned.

     

    @@Pripyat Pony, @,

    But she was thrown for a loop when not one, but two more alicorns showed up to view the same note on the board and to stick around and wait for the owner of it... She stepped back nervously, feeling caught off guard and embrassed to be around other alicorns, it being bad enough she had to see Celestia and Luna after every diplomatic meeting she went to. But now she was amongst two other royals she had only heard about in notes and guest list meetings. She heard of Clover, but shrugged her off as just another magic lover like Twilight. If I didn't know any better I'd say they were twins, she thought to herself as she pulled her hood and cape over her horn, trying to hide her alicorn features. Though she's heard of her magical traits and abilities, she never heard of Clover committing to any assistance or help in running the land of Equestria, thus only seemed to annoy Bliss. It's not like I don't accept who I am....I just hate all the attention. That doesn't mean I take part in helping other cultures in their meetings and negotiations. The other one, she suspected to be Prince Blaze, she knew even less about. All for the better, most likely he doesn't know anything about Lightning Bliss the Alicorn of Peace...at least I hope so...She sighed and sat down, making herself look as small and invisible as possible. Her long gryphon like tail didn't make things any easier as she tried to hide in the back behind the pony @@RedStorm,

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    A weary white mare dressed in her hidden brown cloak with saddle bags heavily hung against her sides, walked into the town hall to speak with the secretary office pony for the last thing on her list. Her bags were stuffed with groceries from the town market, heavy with apples, celery, ranch dressing (Night Light's favorite) and tomatoes, along with at least three small boxes of Granny Smith's apple pies. I really wonder if I really wanted those pies...or did Apple Jack just made them sound too good to be true...she asked herself as she ringed the bell on the clerk's desk.

     

    "Yes?" A stallion spoke roughly, not of his choice, it was late afternoon and he was tired from all the paper work the mayor threw on him, "what can I do you for ma'am?"

     

    "Hi there sir, Lightning Bliss is my name," she forcedly introduced herself knowing the stallion would probalby make a scene to her annoyance, "I'm just here to see if some scrolls from Princess Celestia came through yet. She said if they didn't get to my mail then they'd show up here."

     

    "Oh yes of course your Highn-"

     

    "Please...just Blissy will do," she cut him off before he could throw in his formalities.

     

    "Oh um...*coughs* yes your High-erm- Mrs. Bliss?" He stuttered as he quickly began to scroll through files and boxes under his desk.

     

    "Good enough sir, I just hate formalities, you understand right?" She gave him a gentle, apologetic smile.

     

    "I understand Mrs. Bliss. No trouble at all." He smiled back to her, fading back to his normal voice as he rummaged under his desk. "no...No....Hmm...that's not it...Scrolls...Princess Celestia...to Lightning Bliss...no...no..." He finally stood up after a moment of searching. "I'm...sorry Mrs. Bliss, the scrolls you asked for haven't seemed to arrive yet. Are you sure her Highness said they would come here if not your mail?"

     

    She sighed annoyingly, "Yes she did...and this is the second time I've come back here today...The whole point I did my shopping here is because of those scrolls to save on time, yet my priority thing to get on my list isn't here?" She stomped her hoof.

     

    "I'm truely sorry Mrs. Bliss...Is there anything I can do?" He asked as sincerely as possible, feeling small against the small white alicorn.

     

    "Oh Luna, I'm sorry sir," she placed a hoof on his desk, "forgive me I'm just having one of those days you know? Don't worry about it, I'll just check my mail again. If they don't show up in a few days I'll just message Celestia. Thank you!" She tapped his desk again in a fairwell, and headed towards the entrace where the board was of the town hall, and took a seat to give her back a rest from her bags. Well this ceretaintly failed in my priority shopping...she snorted annoyingly to herself as she stared admittly at the board of messages, scrolls on new magic spells I could be practicing right now...as Mrs. Sun Princess so bluntly requested that I do...and yet she's still not sent them to me?! GAH, so stupid! I wish there was a better way to learning all this magic then to just simply take orders from her Longhornship.....Doesn't she know that I'm trying to make my life and living as normal as possible? I'm struggling with my art shop as it is in the money without her telling me to take time off to go to town to pick up scrolls that aren't showing up just to learn her MAGIC LESSONS! She paused for a moment, trying to gather her thoughts and cool off, when off the corner of her eye, she spotted an odd message tacked to the board. She tilted her head at the bold black writing for a moment, then looked around to see if other ponies were staring at it, or her in general direction. When she felt alone enough, she approached the board to read the message.

     

    Lucrative but Well-paying offer

    Ponies of all species welcome to join

    If interested, meet at this location at 11:00 PM sharp.

     

    I wonder what this is all about? She asked herself as she re-read the message again. Hmmm...well I need to make it worth my while since I'm in Ponyville... and I'm not really up for a flight back with my groceries up to the mountain right now... She looked at her bags then and made a rough estimate of how far away the town hall was from her mountain home, then focused her alicorn magic. It was a little short, but she managed to teleport her bags all the way to the edge of the cave, about 2miles up and away from the twon. There, she nodded, Night Lights can deal with the bags. Let's see who shows up for this.."well paying offer"

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  16. @@arkman575,

     

    Soon as the wolf darted into her room all the way, teeth barring, she slammed her door behind him, locking it tight.

     

    "I'm sorry Seth," she calmed herself just enough to talk in a normal voice, it was scratchy from all the squealing she'd been doing previously. Coughing to clear her throat, she sighed and turned him, eyes full of hope and worry, "I had to get you in here without drawing Boom's attention...I know she's been talking to you..."

     

    She sat down and curled up on the bed. "You know that vampires exist just as much as I do now, never forgetting what happened between the two of us..." She darted her eyes on him then, locking firmly, "whatever she has told you is a lie...You have got to believe me...Have you looked at Sidewinder lately? Did you see his neck?" Before she allowed him to answer, she continued, "look I know a vampire bite when I see one... When I found Sidewinder, it was this morning...I tripped over his body, it was dead cold...yet he rose up...like from the dead...I saw his neck...clear two puncture wounds on it. Atlas found two paris of pony tracks before mine when he went to investigate too. He believes that this was a vampire attack...and we clearly believe he was turned by Boom...Whatever she said to you...she's trying to sweet talk you into letting your guard down!"

     

    She leapt off her bed then trotted to her wall, placing a large floppy ear on it, trying to listen in to what Boom and Atlas were talking about. "Atlas is being too bold...he's confronted her already about it...She suspects we know too...that's why she's trying to get you on her side. She's already turned Sidewinder...and I don't know what he's going to do..." She looked at her loyaltest friend she's ever known..."Seth...we have two vampires in the house...and we can't escape... you believe me don't you?"

  17. @@Firehearted, @@Bada3oom Box, @,

     

    As she entered into the living room with Atlas behind she spotted BB and Seth entering together into the cabin, making her duck for cover behind a couch before either one of them could speak. Her plan to get Seth alone wasn't going as well as she hoped seeing that Boom was with him, and already sweet talking him into getting on her side. This isn't good but...she tried to calm herself, Seth is my friend...he wouldn't be disloyal...loyalty has always been his greatest tribute and he's never let me down before...Surely he will believe what I have to say when I get the chance? She shook her head trying to cast out any doubt she had as she continued to listen to the others in the room. Finally after a few shaking moments of hearing them talk all ponies and Seth headed up the stairs, leaving her what she thought was...alone.

     

    She poked her head out from behind the couch, took a breath and slowly tip-hooved her way towards the stairs. But then...off the corner of her eye, she spotted Sidwinder staring out the window. She froze like a deer in the headlights knowing for sure, seeing her sneaking around the cabin wasn't part of the plan. But in that split second of fear, she saw it...that vampire flicker...the red tint in his eyes...Maybe he didn't realize that he was flickering his new sight...but she saw it for that one second. It was more then enough for her to move quickly. She focused her magic, and teleported to her bed room, making sure the door was shut but not locked.

     

    Then in a heap of true panic...but as she planned it to be...she took a deep breath and whinnied as loud as she could.

     

    @@arkman575,

    "SETH COME QUICK!!! RABID RACOON IN MY ROOM!!! HELP PLEASE HELP!"

  18. @@Firehearted,

     

    "That's a good question," she replied back hesitently, "I couldn't help but notice... I mean... Is it just me or does he and Boom seem to talk alot with each other? I just notice she liked being with him when I first showed up. Maybe it was because she already picked him as a target...but is the feeling mutial with him...now that he's...sired by her?"

     

    She stood up and paced around the kitchen for a moment, trying to figure out how to handle the situation. But it felt like she was treading on egg shells. There was a storm blowing outside, cutting their ways of escape...Two vampires in the cabin, and one of them obviously cunning in her hunting talents...and then you have a rookie vampire who's not yet settled into his fangs. "Thank Luna that at least Sidewinder isn't an aggressive soul...otherwise the vampire curse would have increased his thirst of anger and..." she gulped and placed a hoof on her neck protectively. "I'll try to get Seth's attention as soon as he enters the cabin. I'll be up in my room waiting. Soon as he comes, I'll give a good loud shriek and call for his aid to hunt down a rabid um...Not a rat..." she giggled a bit, "I have pet rats you know... I love them I think they are adorable!"

     

    She bonked her horn against the counter then, trying to make herself focus as well as to ease the tension, "Heh anyways I gotta make it sound believable. I'll shriek that there's a rabid racoon in my room. That will get his attention." She headed towards the door that opened to the living room that aided to the stairs where all their personal rooms are. "I'll go now, but what will you do Atlas?" She paused at the door, her hoof tenderly pressed against it, looking at him with the deepest worry for his safety.

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