OK sounds good to me! How would you like me to send the story to you?
And with feed back, just fix any grammer mistakes and try to see if you can peice each set of writing together as well as you can to make it flow
Oh no its nothing like that, its a light hearted my little pony FanFic, there might be a few rough parts, but its nothing dirty or very gorey, as long as you dont mind its Ooc's (MY pony character Shiro and my friends red burn) if you dont really like that then thats ok ^^ but if you would care to help then how would you like me to send the story to you?