ThunderTwirl

... it gives some pretty good tips on writing and stuff http://mlpforums.com/topic/43854-mlp-forums-writing-centre/

Thanks I'll check that out right away! I have a friend helping me out a bit with the story and giving me ideas. I'm even using one of his OC's in my story, I'm also doing the same for him.(hes even going to use my OC in his story too.)

tell me about it lol. I've still got the mlp one to finish and the one "arc" that came just before the equestrian started