Love Doctor Blaze

Ok, i can imagine that more clearly, are the spiders something you made up?

Ahh that's good to hear! I will read it later, and offer you my support/feedback I am no writer, but i have read alot of fanfics, so i know a good fanfic when i see one. But don't excpect me to fix any grammar issues, because english isn't my first language XOXO Blazedtime Hello friend, i'm reading through your story now, and i feel like the spiders that attacked RD and TS were not described entirey. What i mean is that i had a hard time imagining the spider (unless it's a big black spider) so add some more descriptions, like color, texture of the creature, did it have teeth things like that, and i feel that the chapter was a bit rushed. They saved the guy, and then BAM twilight is a diplomat. but i'm just neckpinching the chapter was excellent my friend. Hope to read the next chapter soon XOXO Blazedtime

Hello friend! Welcome to this breathtaking website, were people are friendly, and helpfull! I am new my self, so we have that in common But if you wanna talk, then please do text me (I see that you have taken a liking to rarity as well, or so you said at a post. Rarity is going to be an amazing character later in the series!!!) XOXO Blazedtime

i dont know if your story is worth finishing since i haven't read it. But from what i have read in the plot As for a new titile how about: Witchcrafts aprentince, witchcraft in a whole other way, witchcraft is magic, The young cauldron. XOXO Blazedtime

I read about 10 lines in the story, and you have grabbed my interest, my friend! I haven't played any of the fallout games, does that make the story unreadable for me? I will read everything when i have more time on me! XOXO Blazedtime

Yeah, i have tried GTA V. A very realistic game if i must say, and some funny chararcters. I'll look in to the other games you mentioned. I have heard about them, but never tried them myself Thanks for the rec!!

Thanks oobrony, that wil do!

This was a very interesting start indeed. Now my grammar isn't amazing, so i can't fix mistakes. But i have read my fair share of stories, and i can see that you worked hard on this start. I agree with Burning Ember that celestias sentence was a bit out of chraracter. In my opinion it should be: "Luna, i can see that you are troubled. Do you wanna tell me what is troubling you, while we take a stroll through the gardens?. The only tip i can give to you so far, is that you have to make sure the characters stay true to their own character. But so far i love it! Can't wait to see more!

Hi and most warm welcome to you my friend! I know how you are feeling, but don't fret, i am also new, yay! If you wanna talk avout anything then feel free to text me! Fluttershy is also one of my favorite ponies, but i like rarity more (Still love Fluttershy though) I hope that this community will make you feel as happy as it made me feel <3

Hello everyone! Thanks for the incredible welcome to this site, and i can already tell this site has awesome people/ponies. I'm also glad to discover that there are alot of people who like Rarity like i do! So if any of you Rarity fans out there wanna talk about her, pm me! Now i have a question to ask. Is it possible for me to post my own reviews on episode here? If so, please let me know how And incase any of you are gamers. Steam:TheAwesomeSmiley. League Of Legends:DRSBStyler And if you have any games you would recommend, then do tell :3 Once again thanks for the welcome! Bye!!!! xoxo Blazedtime

My Favourite Mane 6 Pony: Rarity How did you find MLP Forums?: Was looking for other bronies to interact with How you became a fan of My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic: Well it's mainly because of Rarity that i watch this show, because she is the funniest, and most normal pony in my opinion. I'm a male from Denmark who enjoys playing videogames and reading fanfics. In my free time i train karate, and play basketball