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So. What did you think of what I had done with the book so far?
4april
Well, I like how you raised some interesting questions early on and started with the trigger! The story was definitely interesting.
Maybe a little more attention can be paid to writing conventions (especially including dialogue).
Is this suppose to be a novel?
BlackHole(TimeLord)
It depends. Like I said it's a work in progress. I have it set so anyone can find it and comment on it. I need more inspiration.