I've uploaded both the Preface and Entry #1 today. The Preface should explain what I'm doing...kind of...So, I recommend reading that first.
I hope my format isn't too confusing, ^^;
I don't mind if you comment or give constructive criticism in either DeviantArt, FaceBook, or here...although I'm not sure how much criticism can be made for an introductory..."chapter". I suppose my writing format or something can be criticized.
If I get around with trying to draw, then I can show you what the appearing OC/s look/s like.
I hope ya'll can enjoy the first couples of entries that aren't rewrites just yet but are an introduction to the OC I'll be using. Eventually, I'll hit episode 3 and switch perspectives and such between him and the actual focal character(s) of the episode; but, for now, introduction/"back-story" for three "chapters"/"episodes".
DeviantArt: http://shin-ak1ra-sama.deviantart.com/gallery/60214046/MLP-FiM-Rewrite
FaceBook: https://www.facebook.com/groups/877549315713402/files/
Oh, right. I made a FaceBook version, because my friend wasn't able to view it in DeviantArt, for some reason. So, that's a thing, I guess...