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But you guys are right, we need to come up with a system of how well do this. If we have 6 roleplays, their are issues with interacting with other houses, not to mention keeping up with all 6 roleplays could be hard, and the smallest mistakes could ruin the roleplay. But on the other hand if we make only 1 roleplay thread, we have like 15 roleplayers, witch can make very crowded posts. I would really hate to see this roleplay fail because of bad planning. If anyone has any suggestions or ideas as to how we can do this, please post your ideas.

I wouldnt say their doing much wrong in a moral sence, but those 3 houses have played a part in dividing equestria and more or less, they look out for the benifit of the house over the benefit of equestria.

Guys lets not forget, like equestrian scholar said Twilight is probably the best mage in equestria. So in a 1 on 1 duel odds are most oc's would lose.

I wasnt, i had a cool plot idea to organise how they fight. I was thinking of writing that Tondrak's last magical item was in Twilight's private study room. I was acutually planning on Tondrak losing the fight. Anyway it's just a work in progress, the roleplay hasnt even started yet. Well happy new year everyone. Also acualy is dolan, im a little confused. Did you still wanna be in the roleplay?

I was acutually thinking it would be pretty cool if my oc Tondrak fought Twilight after he got all his items.

If the alicorn amulet is in the roleplay it would be in house everfree. Zacora would have it but i doubt fluttershy would want it to be used, seeing as it corrupts the user.

Sorry for taking so long to get back to you. But i was busy because of family during christmas. Speaking of wich happy holidays everyone. Lets focus on your oc Standoff before we work on red alert. Honestly, i don't even know where to start on getting him into equestria divided. I don't want to change him too much since he's your oc, but I would like you to give me as much information as possible about your oc, so i have something to work with. You said that you wanted the siege of manehattan in your oc's backstory. The only way i could think of that happening is if Standoff wanted to be a mercenary for Whitegold and that's where he meets red alert. And the siege itself would only be a fairly small diamond dog attack. Also can you think of a more detailed childhood backstory of how he grew up into the pony he is today. Again sorry for the wait and sorry if i wasnt much help up to date.

Is it too late to join? Ive never done a d&d before but i would like to try one. If i can join what do i need to make in terms of a caracter? ok i dont think i'll be able to get everything ready in time. Im kinda busy tommorow, but thanks for letting me know.

"Yes i am, it is good to finaly meet you king flare. We have just made an alliance with the changelings..." Tondrak glanced at Nameless. "... and have found an interesting new ally, he is known by nameless. I can scence that he is quite strong in dark magic... Now what do you wish to do now that you have returned?"

(OOC: S**t just got real, Chrysalis, Tondrak, Flare, and a couple others all working together. This is gonna be big) "An alliance with the changelings? That would work perfectly to futher both are goals, and giving me my book to sweeten the deal, very well. Let your queen know about the new alliance." Tondrak took his book and began to laugh. "Haahaha. At last im at my full power, this is perfect!" Tondrak felt the pressence of another person nearby. Tondrak used telekenesis to pull Nameless out of the shadows and into the open. "Who are you and why are you spying on me?"

But still you would pay attention if there's a bolt in your crossbow when you point it at someone. But anyway... be carefull, make sure that your post's make sence and dont get yourself in to much danger, cuz it you dont have your faction supporting you in a big battle, your screwed. And this also goes for the rest of you guys too.

The roleplay was http://mlpforums.com/topic/31798-were-really-dead-this-time/The one were we trasnfer from game to game. It happened on page 4 up to 6. And you are right that you make things up in roleplays, but it vary's from roleplay to roleplay. Example: Equestrian scholar is all about detail, he wants well though out posts and a plot that makes sence. He doesnt want you to make something up to save your oc. Example: if you oc were for example captured by an group of 10 soldiers, odds are that your best way of getting out alive might be to try and negotiate for your life. You cant write that you managed to kill all of them by yourself. It needs to make some sence. Do you understand what i mean? I havnt started working on your oc's yet sorry. I'll get on it when i get a free moment.

Tondrak had returned to the hideout inside the mountains. His magical struggle agaisnt meta knight had taking alot out of him. He was pacing around one of his zombies, he was in a bad mood. "He managed to hold his own agaisnt me, im going to kill him...IM GOING TO KILL THEM ALL." He turned to his zombie and incinerated it, out of frustration. "...I'll start by bringing back my new ally, flare."

Tondrak was holding his staff, struggling agaisnt both meta knight and Star Rain."That wont work agaisnt me twice." He pulled his staff out of the ground and destroyed the light whip. The ground was now being powered by meta knight. From behind Tondrak, approached Thunder and the others. Tondrak was now surrounded. "Well it looks like im outnumbered...Enjoy your short victory while it last's because i will be back, with an army strong enough to take over all of Equestria. I will take everything you all hold dear and ill burn it to the ground." Tondrak opened a portal heading into the mountains and steeped through it.

Tondrak tryed to counter the wind with a powerful fire spell, but meta's wind broke through. At the last second Tondrak used a weaker wind spell to deflect meta's wind to the side, destroying one side of the building. Tondrak walked out of the building and onto the grass. He stabbed his staff into the ground. "I claim this city, in the name of my new found ally, king flare!" Threw out the city of Trottingham, the green grass began to turn yellow and die, his staff was absorbing the very life of the landscape.

For a breaf moment, the light spell broke the darkness in Tondrak's staff. But the dark ora allmost immediatly returned. Tondrak reassembled, and now looked very angry. "Enough of this!" Tondrak teleported inbetween Star Rain and his staff. He grasped his staff and did a 360 turn while shooting fire from his staff, setting most of the magic shop aflame. They fire was heading towards, Meta knight and Star rain.

Tondrak was blinded momentarely by the light orb. Star rain charged at Tondrak and cut off his head. Tondrak's body fell to the ground...after a few seconds the pile of bones reasembled. Tondrak used telekenesis and from one of the shelves, he pulled his staff into his hoofs. He began to have a dark and demonic ora around him. He looked at Star Rain "You were right, you will have to pay, with your life." Tondrak could feel that most but not all of his strengh had returned.

"I do believe you have me confused with someone else... i died over 1000 years ago, wait one moment and i shall show you the idiocy of challenging me." Tondrak ran into the store approaching his staff. (Tondrak is not the mad king flare, thats brosparkles oc) (ooc:Brosparkle i think you should maybe add a link to your oc flare in the ooc because people are starting to confuse my oc with yours)

Tondrak was walking down the street, not knowing that Star Rain was following him. After a little while Tondrak made it to the entrance of the towns magic shop. He could sence that his staff was very close now, once he got his staff all he would need to reach his full power, would be his book on necromancy. Tondrak opened the door into the shop.

Your oc looks better, i cant see any more big changes. Equestrian scholar will have the final say on your oc, he might want you to add more detail. ps the pike like axe your oc has, i think the word your looking for is halberd I will PM you, to help you change your oc's, but there's a couple things i would like to make clear first. When i help you, their WILL need to be some big changes of your oc. I will try to keep your oc as much to your liking as possible, but still make him fit in with the equestria divided setting. We will need to comprimise This roleplay is based on reality in the sence that, the choses your oc's make will effect weather they live or die. Example: If your oc is taking on 10 equally armed ennemis by himself, he will die. You cant do whatever you want and expect there not to be consequences. Also you when roleplaying you need to stay in reality, you cant just make things up as you go along. I brought this up because i roleplayed with you once in the past and your oc left the group to die. When my oc confronted you i held a crossbow to your oc. And you wrote that your oc managed to pickpocket the bolts and unload the crossbow without my oc realizing it. Just saying that that's unrealistic because my oc would have realized if he was pointing an unloaded crossbow at you, and if you do something like that in this roleplay Equestrian scholar probably wont tolerate it. Im not trying to scare you or anything, im just letting you know what you can and cant do when the roleplay starts. Now ill help you with your oc.

Sorry man but their are some rules and guidelines to follow. When making an oc you need to make sure it fits in with the setting, you can add some things to help add to the setting also but still need to stay withing reason. Sorry to say but as they are now, your oc's wont be accepted. I can help you out as best i can, iv'e got good idea's and can help you make your oc's acceptable for Equestrian scholar.

The laughting doll could work, im not sure what Equestrian scholar would think about that though.But all and all you did a fairly good job. Just maybe take away the battle at ponyville, because it was after the flood of ponyville that Earthborn decalred war on stormwing. Maybe you can write that they took a hoofcanon from earthborn. And acualy is dolan, maybe i can help you make the changes to your oc.

Ok i looked over the oc's that still need to be accepted and have some information on things you guys need to change or add. Halfnote's dogmatic: is being looked over by equestrian scholar Higurashi's Diamond holder: He needs more detail, but one of your oc's have already been accepted so you should know what you need to add in terms of detail. As equestrian scholar said his age needs to be changed; in the episode were Twilight got her cutie mark, Twilight was around 8 years old when skipe was hatched. It looks like Twilight is now around 18 and Spike look like he's around 10. So drgons do seem to age more or less normally, with a life expectancy of maybe 1000 years(guess). Because in the episode Dragonshy, he was going to hybernate for 100 years. In short, i would estimate that for him to be the size he is in the roleplay, he would need to be in his 20-40's Nightfall's Nightfall Starline: Your oc is coming along nicely but their are things you need to add and change. Like Equestrian Scholar said your engine will help give power to the houses but not determine the outcome of battles, so you should make it weaker. As for why he left Canterlot, it dosnt make sence because of the timeline, Canterlot wasnt dangerous for alicorns as soon as the princess's went missing, over time Twilight became more evil. So you might want to change the reason why he left. As for why he joined house moon and star makes even less sence, he would be in alot of danger in that house and didn't have a real reason for joining them. I do have a suggestion: maybe the reason he joined moon and star was because his engine required strong magic to be made, so joining house moon and star would help him come closer to completing his engine. acualy is dolan: I had alot of things i needed to discuss with you. You have a lot of things you will need to change and add. If you need help i will give you a hand. Your oc's backstory for equestria divided look ok, but you need to make some changes. Also your oc's general backstory are no good because there are alot of groups not mentioned in the Equestria divided setting (like the PKVD) and there are no guns(with the exeption of house earthborn's hoof cannons, which have one shot until you need to reload, prone to misfire and have bad accuracy, but they are very powerful) I suggest you make a diffrent backstory of how they were raised just for the Equestria divided setting. About Standoff: Firstly, this roleplay has no rockets, the closest thing would be canons, wich are heavy and take a few ponies to opperate. Secondly, Stormwing wasn't losing any battles, they flooded the city because Twilight tricked Rainbow Dash into thinking their were rebels in ponyville. About Red Alert: Snipers dont exist, the closest thing to a gun for him would be a hoof canon, which would have a fairly long reload time. Im not sure were Equestrian Scholar would stand on the smilling doll.

Tondrak raised a protective shield to block Star Rain's attack. Before the water orb hit, Tondrak's shield colaspsed upon itself. Tondrak was shocked at how much weaker he was, he couldnt even keep a shielding spell up for a couple of seconds. The orb hit Tondrak trapping him in a water ball."Do you think you can drown me? I dont need to breath." Tondrak shot fire to evaporate his water prison. "I cant waste any more time with you, my staff awaits my return." Tondrak sent his zombies to kill Star Rain as he began to head towards the towns magic shop.

The other cultists began to set houses on fire, waiting for the villagers to flee their burning homes. Tondrak approached, he saw Dust fighting agaisnt the other ponies. "Ahh,their fighting agaisnt Dust, it looks like not all of the ponies here are cowards, maybe i should fix that." Tondrak walked up and shot a few fire ball spells. They were fairly smaller than he had expected.