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Jacob though to himself (Well it looks like he's still pretty pissed, but that's to be expected after everything that's happened) "Before we get down to busyness i want to make something clear, it wasn't my fault things ended this way, everything went according to my plan. It was that asshole Redwing who screwed the both of us, at least he's dead now. And yes there is someone else, a mare i named PowerFly, she saved my life, she can't talk and she isn't a prisonner. What's interesting is that she might have been turned into a killing machine. And don't worry about her, i'll make sure I dont make the same mistake i made with Redwing, if it come's down to it, i won't hesitate to kill her if she puts us in danger but i don't want it to come to that. Right now i don't know where she is. Anyway there's alot of stuff i found out, and i don't want to get into all of it right now. Before i can determine are next move, i need to know everything that you know about this prison, the warden and any information that can be useful."

Jacob walked into the cell. Jacob could see by the look on ShadowHoof's face, he was still mad. "ShadowHoof, buddy, I can see your still angry about being in prison. You know how much i hate wasting time, so im going to cut to the chase. Im in a position were i can barely trust anyone. Out of everyone in the prison I trust you the most. Im going to break out of this prison and i want you to help me. For obvious reasons i can't tell you my plans until you agree to join me. Things might get dangerous. So what do you say, work with me again, for old times sake?"

"Well thank you for your offer but im going to have to decline." The other pony walked off into the shadows. Jacob was disapointed that he didnt do any trading yet. But he realised that if something seemed to good to be true it probably was. Jacob thought for a moment (I need to find out more about the warden, is he a friend or foe. In order to find out, i need alot of resources and allies. Those people who attacked PowerFly looked like convicts. I know that the warden is somewhere, trapped in this prison with the rest of us. Could the warden be posing as a convict? That means i can barely trust anyone. I should find ShadowHoof he can be very helpful, thats the reason i robbed banks with him before i came to this hell hole, but i havent talked to him since the riot, when he killed Redwing) Jacob walked out of the yard and headed towards ShadowHoof's cell #1007 (OOC: I made up shadowhoof and redwing for this roleplay so they dont have backstories or personallity, you can decide whatt type of personallity shadowhoof has. )

I dont mean to offend you but 2 OC's per house is alot. That's a total of 12 OC's. Not alot of roleplayers are always commited to the roleplay's they get into. I've seen alot of roleplayers drop out near the beginning of roleplays. If you want that many OC's in this roleplay, i would think that each roleplayer might need 3 or 4 OC's each. It also might get confusing if you have so many caracters. But it's your roleplay and your choices. I think i might also make my OC from scratch.

(OOC: I think you meant Jacob, not Usaf...lol for a second i thought you meant the scientist pony loked like this http://ask-frigiddrift.tumblr.com/image/32916754948 ) Jacob was mad that he didnt get to access the military files but he didnt show it with his expression. Jacob lied about his reason for going on the computer "Very well, im sorry, im just trying to find a map of the base, you see im a little lost. Would you mind showing me around the base?"

(OOC: sorry but i changed a bit of the posts wording but its more or less the same ) Twilight and her group were making good progress. They took back most of the city. Same thing with RainbowDash. "Unfortunatly for you that this is both love and war." Fluttershy stabbed the Tartarus soldier. "Diehard, you didnt have to do that for me." Just by looking at the wound Fluttershy could tell that the blade went in deep. She began to heal his shoulder. The forces were killing the Tartarus troops, it seemed as they won the battle. Until Tartarus reinforcements came running down one of the street's. Fluttershy and Diehard were cut off from the other Equestrian soldiers. "Im not done healing your wound." With Diehard's wound he couldnt run quickly, Fluttershy could only think of one thing left to do. "No matter what happens know that I love you." Diehard asked "Wait what are you doing Fluttershy?" Fluttershy looked back at him and didnt say anything. She kissed him then she flew up to the Tartarus troops and killed one. "You cant beat Fluttershy, former member of the EOH and current member of the EOU." Fluttershy was bluffing, she knew that she couldnt take them all on by herself, she wanted to draw their attention away from Diehard. The Tartarus soldier in charge sayed "If i can take down a member of the EOU, lord Slender Mane will surely reward me... ALL SOLDIERS KILL OR CAPTURE HER." Fluttershy flew away drawing their attention from Diehard, as she planned. Jacob pulls out his sword and blocks the princess's attack."You still seem pretty small and insignificantly weak to me, but i agree lets end this." Jacob swings his sword and manage's to cut her slightly but also takes a hit. Using her magic, the princess heals her wound. Jacob's wound heals shut quicker than the princess's. While the princess and Jacob are fighting, boulders are still being trown by the kraken, indiscriminatly killing both moose and Tartarus soldiers alike. The Tartarus forces were losing. Jacob and the moose princess are now in a duel of magic, firing spell after spell. Jacob managed to make her drop one of her two swords They both fire a stream of magic, the moose princess's stream begins to move closer and closer to Jacob. Jacob tries to fight back but gets hit and knocked down. The moose princess stands over Jacob ready to give the final blow. "Not so small and insignificant, now that im standing over you." "Size and brute force arn't the only factors to determine the winner. Unlike you i can fly, not to mention my healing factor's better than yours." Jacob grabs some dirt and throw's it in her face, giving him the chance to get up. Jacob fly's in the sky and preforms a sonic boom aiming for the princess. The princess gets the dirt out of her eyes and see's Jacob coming. She jumps out of the way. Jacob hits the ground and creates a crater. The moose princess shoots a blast of magic at Jacob's hands disarming him. She then charges at him with her sword. "I must admit your better than i thought, but..." Jacob raises his arm to block the sword. Instead of trying to pull it out, he pushes his arm deeper in the sword so that he can grab her neck with his hoof. "...your nothing compared to me." Jacob then fly's himself and the princess into one of the kraken's falling boulders. They both get crushed. The fighting stops on both side's, they stare at the boulder were their leaders we crushed. After a moment of silence, the boulder breaks in half. Jacob is standing with injuries, while the princess is uncouncious. He pulls the sword out of his arm and puts it up to the princess's neck. All of Jacob's wounds slowly begin to heal. "Moose soldiers, let us retreat now or else i kill your princess." The moose soldiers were forced to agree or else the princess would die. Jacob put the princess on his back and retreated with the four last remaining Tartarus soldiers. They walked on to the kraken's hand. "Kraken take us out to sea." Jacob shackled the princess in chains attached to an iron ball. She began to wake up. "It looks like you weren't powerful enough." "you know nothing of my power." "That might be true, but I know about your weakness's. Buffalo, ponies, moose, deer, in the end, all of you are the same. Your weakness lies in your emotions such as love. I've watched as love destroyed familys. Love can bring out hate in people. For example, the whole reason you want to kill me, is out of revenge, because i killed your people." (When Abyss had to kill WW, 2 years ago it broke her heart and Razorwing has hated me since the day his mother died) But still you people insist on fighting for love, even though it's caused so much pain. You don't want to give up hope. You all fight till the bitter end...(I think i finally understand what i've been feeling, Envy... I envy them. They always have loved ones to help and support them during the rough times. But me, im all alone. If i were to die it would be an inconvinience to Tartarus, but no one would miss me because i can be replaced. Im expendaple. When Razorwing helped me I felt like someone cared, even though he only did it so that he could kill me himself but i was intriged when he asked me to fight for him, next time i see him i have something very special planned.) "if thats what you think jacob then who do you fight for? What is your purpose?" "Who do i fight for? I fight for myself, from the beging the only thing i've ever fought for was my amusement. It was a mutual gain, Tartarus got a powerful ally, and I could lead as many soldiers as i wanted into battle. And my purpose is to lay waste to all my ennemis. But i dont have time to talk to you about this, i need to make a meeting with your father, im sure that he worries about you. I wouldnt try to escape if i were you, your in the middle of the ocean and that iron ball will drag you to the bottom of the ocean...Commander" Jacob looks at the Tartarus commander. "Yes, sir" "If you dont hear back from me, and only ME in two hours from now, kill the princess then return back to Equestria. I'll contact you with the com-links...Kraken you hear that, if im not back in two hours go to Equestria." "As you command sir" Jacob flew towards Concordia, he did a sonic boom. Uppon approching the giant tree of Concordia, home of the Moose king, Jacob was being shot at with magic. He was dodging shot after shot. "This is taking too long." Jacob teleported himself inside the throne room. Guards surrounded him within seconds, they held spears at Jacob's neck. The moose king was sitting at his throne. "Moose king it's a pleasure to finally meet you. I came hear to talk. I suggest you call you guards off me, we wouldnt want anyone to do somthing stupid."

Also i would suggest you put up a character list soon. So we get an idea how many people have already been accepted

Jacob was somewhat caught of guard by Daft's presence. "Yes we can, but you cant tell anyone else about this. I have a plan. Now i need to decode the rest of this book." Jacob was working on decoding the rest of the book. Twilight and the others set up the picnic. Spike woke up and heard the knocking. Spike spoke "Hello Fluttershy, what are you doing here, i thought you were supposed to be having a picnic with Twilight and the others."

Jacob thought about it for a moment and decided not to go with him. He thought it would be to dangerous with all his stuff with him. "I'll tell you what i want and you can bring it back here, im looking for an assassin's grade handgun." Jacob wanted to stay in the safety of the yard.

Jacob looked back at AppleJack and Pinky Pie "Yes, i guess you could say that im getting ready for a party. But this isn't just any regular party, this party is only for earth ponies. You can be a part of this, if you want. Join the protest. You don't have to decide right now, think about it, in time the unicorn and pegasi will treat you like garbage, and when that happen i'll accept you with open arms." Jacob walked away with Daft. "I think were done for the day, we've made are point here. There are preperations i need to look into. Well meet again at the sign up stand tommorow." Jacob smiled as he found out that Twilight was going to a picnic. Twilight tried to comfort Fluttershy."It's ok Fluttershy, look the protesters are dispanding. Now we should probably start the picnic soon." Jacob though to himself (Twilight is suppose to have the biggest library in all of Ponyville) Jacob was making his way towards Twilight's house. Jacob was about to break into her home. He opened one of the windows and made it inside. Jacob began looking though all of Twilight's books. Jacob heard a noise and stopped moving. When he looked around, he saw Spike asleep in his bed, snoring. Jacob keep quiet and looked for a specific book. After a few minutes he found it and left her house. "With this i can found out the location of the artifact." Jacob opened the book and saw that it was encoded. "This might take a while." Jacob began to uncode the secrets of inside the book.

OK, i will also work on another caracter i made for a roleplay, but it didnt quite take off. So i'll add more detail and post it after im done. I think he could be a good fit to the cult of laughter

Ya sorry about that my but like i sayed i didnt want to work on my bio until you confirmed my question. So based on my arguments on the post above can Jacob have some sort of relationship with Twilight before the 15 years?

(OOC: With Clarity gone, no one's roleplaying as AppleJack. In this roleplay, AppleJack is going to have a fairly big role to play, along with Pinky Pie. So does anyone what to roleplay as AppleJack?) The protest group was pretty big, they went into the market and demanded fair prices. The market dealers felt intimidated by the number of earth ponies. Most of them offered more than fair prices out of fear of the protest getting violent. This could only make the relationship with earth ponies and the other races worse. "A picnic sounds like a wonderful idea Pinky Pie." Most of the others agreed with Pinky Pie's idea for a picnic, so they left Twilight's house. On their way to the picnic location, they crossed the town market and saw the protest group. "I've seen alot of these flyers about a protest group. I have to say im a little worried that things might get out of hoof." With a couple of other protesters, Jacob walked up to the pegasus shopkeeper who threw a tomato in his face. "Hello shopkeep, remember me." The shopkeeper looked nevous. "Please just leave, I dont want any trouble. Im sorry about last week. You arn't still mad about that are you?" Jacob said in a sarcastic voice. "Why would i still be mad about that, aside from the humilliation?" Jacob picked up a carrot off his food stand and took a bite out of it, without paying for it. "It taste's like your food is starting to rot, here let me and my friends help take those off your hoofs, free of charge." They took his food without paying for any of it, he was too afraid to complain with the number of earth ponies.

"Well arn't you excited Daft. I guess we can start now." Jacob looked back at the group of earth ponies behind him."MY FELLOW EARTH PONIES WE WILL NOW WALK TO THE TOWN MARKET AND PROTEST FOR ARE EQUALITY!!" With that the protest group marched towards the market.

Jacob ran away. "Damn it, at least he didnt see my face. That didnt go as i planned, but that dosn't matter, there are still lots of ponies to trade with." Jacob was still a little disapointed that Red didnt want to do busyness with him. He walked up to other traders and asked "Were can i find someone to get a good grade gun?"

Jacob smiled. "Now that's what i want to hear. Tell me, what's your name." Daft introduced himself. "Daft, good to meet you my name's Jacob. You can be as violent as you want as long as you think straight and dont do anything stupid or dangerous. Now let me ask you this. Think carefully before you anwser, im going to hold you to your words. Just how far are you willing to go to get our rights?"

Jacob has been preparing, he had been doing some research on an artifact that could possibly be the anwser to the unicorn and pegasus problem. In the mean time he was working on the protest group. On the outside everything looked like a simple protest for equal rights, but if that didnt work he was planning on starting a revolution. Jacob keeped his plans a secret, even from his earth pony bretheren. He couldnt risk to let his plans get out. Jacob was working at a recruitment stall when he saw Daft approach. "You their, would you like to join the group for equal treatment?"

Jacob didnt stand a chance agaisnt Church with his injuries from earlier, even if Power Fly bandaged him up he felt the pain. Jacob coughed as Church had his hoof on his neck. "I just came here to talk and do some trading. I take it that the fire somehow inconvenienced you, im sure that we can come to some sort of arrangement, I have alot to offer. Just tell your friend to get the hell off me already."

Jacob got up from his bed and stopped Power Fly for a moment. "Power Fly you saved my life. Thank you. We're gonna meet again and we'll get out of this prison. so be careful." Jacob walked back in his cell and took a moment to think, he was trying to think about what happened.(Who were those 5 stallions, did the warden send them, or did he try to help me, by warning me that Power Fly was in danger? How come i wasnt killed? Could... Power Fly have killed them all?) His mind flashed back to when she wrote: They said I was born to be a new kind of 'being', a being of energy and flesh, a being capable of doing terrible things. Jacob was shocked that she might have taken on 5 stallions and won without even having a scratch. "It would explain how im still alive" Jacob now wanted to do some trading. He saw that Power Fly also brought back his equipment and left the the broken plasma shield wich he gave her earlier. He spoke to himself "I wonder did you manage to fix it?" Jacob put on his scarecrow mask, took all his equipment then headed for the yard, he wanted to see if he could find Red now, so he could finally trade items. He walked into the yard and saw him with another pony, it was Church. Jacob had no clue that Church was trying to find him earlier and that he knew about the scarecrow mask. He walked up to them and interrupted. "Hello, mister Red, im sorry if im interrupting but i would like to do some trading."

Sorry, i forgot to mention that Jacob was 18 when the princess sisters disapeared. So after the 15 year jump, he would now be 33 years old. Ok i read the rules and understand them. About the rule number 8. Its an understandable rule but I would like to argue that if Jacob dosn't have any relationship with Twilight before she became leader of the house, then no matter what Jacob does, he's always viewed by the rest of the house as nothing more than a tool. Also i liked the idea that Jacob helped lead Twilight down the path of darkness and Twilight's house dosnt really have a general for the army. Trixie's the inquisitor so i though Jacob would be the general. And it would also help detail how Twilight changed during the 15 years. I am going to work on the things you asked for but not now, I dont want to detail it anymore until you confirm that Jacob can have some sort of relationship with Twilight. I had a couple good idea's about how Jacob could fit in better.

ok accepted but Big Mac doesnt get Steel forest's wings just yet, the roleplay just started, and the revolutionaries dont have the power to take anothers wings or horns yet. That's gonna happen later in the roleplay.

Link to OOC Topic: http://mlpforums.com/topic/33033-earth-pony-revolution/ Everything was good in Equestria, except for the fact that most but not all of the pegasi and unicorns though that they were better than earth ponies. It never got too bad, sometimes the unicorns and pegasi would act like they were supperior than earth ponies. However, recently things have been getting out of hoof. One day, Jacob was in the Ponyville marketplace. He walked up to a pegasus shopkeeper. "I would like to buy carrots please." The shopkeeper spoke at Jacob with a stern voice. "Ok that's going to be 5 bits per carrot." Jacob shouted "WHAT, THAT'S A COMPLETE RIP OFF. IT SHOULD BE 1 BIT PER CARROT!!!" "WELL, AN EARTH PONY LIKE YOU SHOULD GO DIG IN THE DIRT IF YOU WANT CARROTS." A unicorn guard heard the shouting and decided to check it out. "What's going on here?" "This shopkeeper's trying to rip me off." "No, i just dont want to do busyness with an earth pony." The guard turned his attention to Jacob. "Clearly, you started this. Leave now." Jacob began to walk away angry, he overheard the guard wisper "Stupid earth pony" The shopkeeper spoke "Wait, earth pony..." Jacob turned around to look at the shopkeeper. "Here's a tomato, free of charge" He trew a tomato right in Jacob's face. A crowed of unicorns and pegasi began to laugh at Jacob, even the guard laughted at him. "Mark my words, you'll all regret this!!!" Jacob walked off angry. The next day, Jacob started to organise a protest group for earth ponies but in secret it was a revolution. After one week, the protest group began to get a good number of earth ponies in it. Jacob was looking to get more members. Meanwhile, Twilight and the other elements of harmony, were in her house hanging out. "So what do you girls want to do next?"

ya i know, like i said im not finished i was going to elaborate but i cant now since im going to college, but still thanks for your advice. EquestrianScholar just let me know if the general idea is ok. I'll elaborate when i get back from college.

ok i made a couple touch ups on my oc im not completly finished with his backstory. but let me know what you think about the general idea so far. http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/jacob-r1263

What do you mean by a strange oc? but it should be alright as long as you dont make them overperfect.