adventure Forbidden Love--Chapter 2 Ideas?

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CHAPTER 1
  Long ago, the three types of ponies, the Pegasi, the Unicorns, and the Earth ponies lived in disharmony, and were forbidden to even speak to another breed. Among all the ponies was a young pegasus named Sunspot, who believed that it was possible to live in peace and harmony. But she knew the consequences of rebelling and decided to go with the flow when she was still a filly.
  When Sunspot went to college, the only thing that she thought of was how upset she was to not see her parents everyday. It felt like just the day before she was a little foal learning to write her name. It distracted her while learning, therefore the first day was not the best.
  As Sunspot was leaving school the next day she caught sight of a handsome stallion. He had a white coat and sleek brown hair. His eyes were sapphire blue. But, wait-- It can't be! That handsome stallion is a Unicorn!
  "Goldengrape!" she heard another pony call, probably his friend. The handsome Unicorn galloped of to the friend that had called his name. Sunspot was devastated. She had a huge crush on a Unicorn and even her best friend Fire Wind wouldn't believe the story of Goldengrape. Everypony would think she was a big pile of phony and she would find herself locked up in a jail cell. Can she ever be happy?