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This is where you write or type the day of an ORIGINAL character. It is an Orange Unicorn it could be a him/her how ever you want. He/She is mysterious (if you want her/him to be.)

Here are the rules....

No inappropriate stories (let's keep this kid friendly) ; )

You can name him/her how ever you want.

Remember 800+ characters

Your story has to finish this starter...

Have fun with your work.

You can copy and paste the passage and replace (it) with she or he. Whichever floats your boat.

I do some kind of romance of some kind, but nothing too extreme like I said before (KEEP IT KID FRIENDLY)

 

Enjoy!

 

Running as fast as (it) could a light orange unicorn ran through the streets of Ponyville. Trying to find a place to rest. (It) had been up all night and day, and needed somewhere to sleep. (It) knew (it) was being followed. Desperately trying to look around, but could see only darkness as (it) wondered the terrain. (It) finally found a place to rest.....

 

I hope you have a good time trying to create your short stories. Make them interesting. If you have any questions please PM me. Don't put it in the comments. Please?

 

Thank You!!!!!!!!

 

Also ENJOY!!!!!!

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The orange unicorn had been running and running. She finally thought she found a place to stay. That was when she heard hoof steps behind her. She turned around, desperately trying to find the source. Suddenly, a flash of light illuminates the night followed by the *boom* of a gun going off. The orange unicorn desperately starts running again. She isn't looking where she's going and almost runs in to some pony. She backs up, terror taking a hold of her. "Ma'm, I've been hired to get you out of here. Follow me." says a deep voice. She looks up to see two glowing red eyes. "Don't be scared, I'm just wearing a helmet. It lets me see in the dark. We need to move." The unicorn nods and the stranger takes off. The unicorn does her best to keep up, but she's so tired she trips and falls. She gets up, her heart beating a mile a minute. What ever was chasing her was getting closer, she could feel it. "Hello?" she weakly calls in to the dark forbidding night. "H-help?" she calls again. "Almost there. There's a boat not to far from here. On the river. We're going str-" His voice is cut off by the sound of hooves getting closer. "They found us. Ok, ma'am, listen to me carefully. Hear that sound? That's the river. It's not to far from here. Follow it. When you reach the river, you'll see a light. That's my boat. Get on it and if I'm not there in three minutes, cut the anchor and leave. Here's a knife. GO!" He yells the last word as he pulls out his rifle he had on his back. She starts to hesitate, but he just repeats "Go!" And then starts shooting. Out of the darkness, return shots can be seen. Dirt is kicked up as bullets impact around them. The unicorn needs no more encouragement. She takes off for the river. She makes it to the river and carelessly starts looking for the light. She sees it in the distance and makes a break for it, running with all her strength. She stumbles on to the boat, tired and exhausted, nearly collapsing. As she finally makes it to a seat on the boat, she passes out. Waking to the sound of hooves on wood, the unicorn jumps to her feet and nearly falls over from the effort it takes. A soothing voice calms her. "Easy, easy. You're safe." Tiredly, she sits down and turns to look at the source of the voice. She sees a Tan earth pony looking back at her. He has a grey chest plate on and a large brown duster on over a tight, light brown, body suit. She looks around groggily and see's a helmet and a rifle leaning against the corner of the engine compartment. Now that she has a look around, the unicorn see's the boat isn't that big. It's a small to mid-sized fishing boat. The earth pony walks up and extends a hoof. "Dusty Spurs." The unicorn weakly attempts to return the hoofshake. Dusty, seeing her condition, walks to the back of the boat. She hears a box being open, then shut. Dusty returns with a silver packaged something. "Field rations," he explains "I'm ex-military. These things are dry and bland, but they're very nutritional. Here." He hands her the rations and she promptly opens it, chowing down on the bland but surprisingly satisfying food. "Your family's been worried about you. Do you know how long you were gone?" The unicorn weakly shakes her head. "Almost a month. Do you know how you ended up in ponyville?" Again, she shakes her head."Well, you're safe now so I guess it doesn't matter." He smiles reassuringly and moves back to the back. He grabs a blanket and brings it up to his passenger. "Here, go ahead and sleep. I'll wake you when you're home." She smiles and tries to say thanks, but sleep claims her before she can utter a word.

Edited by Fictional_Author7

Here is my ponysona Lee! An interesting character, by all accounts.


The split minded adventurer David Pocket is here with Poe to keep him company. (Both in need of very heavy editing :/ )


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Also, here's my: Johari Window


 

 

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