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"No I 'ant gonna I've got wait what am I doing and why am I going to kill a mare oh no not this again like when I nearly blew us up with that TNT this has to stop " sparkle dropped his sword ran out the house and flew up until he reached a cloud "what's wrong with me?"

 

"Oh I can answer that for you" the voice came and went into his head "no not you get out of there get out!" Sparkle trying to get the voice out failed "please... G..e.....t o......u....t" sparkle then collapsed on the cloud

 

Midnight flew up the cloud with the pegasus on before rolling her eyes, she went over to hi mand bit his ear "snap out of it" she growled in his ear, "don't make me come in their and kick you're friends flank" she added before pushing his head into the cloud and trying to suffocate him. "you stop this nonsense now and leave or you gonna die" she added wanting him to stop his craziness. 

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Melody had been standing in shock, and confusion. [What the?..... ] She snapped out of it as she heard Rave asking for help. She took off as fast as she could, cursing herself for standing there for so long. She spotted Sparkle on a cloud, and grinned with satisfaction as she saw Midnight. She quickly rush at the mare throwing her off Sparkle. "Get. Off. My. Friend! I'm glad my friends helpped me out, but I still love the idea of getting revenge you know. I'm not weak! I would let you off easy for hitting my ear. Probably just would have done the same to stand up for myself. But I told that if you mess with my friends you'd have a problem. AND YOU TRYED TO KILL SPARKLE!!! Now, you have a problem." Without warning, Melody lunged, bitteing down on her enemy's wing. Her opponent, unable to fly with her clinging on to her wing, began to fall. Melody flew up, her jaws still clamped onto Midnights wing

She dropped her on a cloud, and pinned her down. "I could break your wing. I could break your wing and let you fall to your death! How does that sound? Because this is just a warning. You won't be able to fly well for awhile. If you so much as glare at my friends again, you'll be easy to catch. I'll drag you back here, snap your wing, and drop you. If you push your luck, I might blind you before I kill you! So back off! Because next time, you WILL die. I. Don't. Warn. Twice. Remember that." With a start, she realized that she had been smiling evily while she spoke. And that she had been exited at the thought of killing the pony that was pinned beneath her. [What did I just do? I can understand threatening her, but want to kill her? And looking forward to watching her die?! I'm becoming a murder......]

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"Urgh my head what happened " said sparkle

"Welcome young sparkle sword to your mind " the voice was creeping around

"What do you want with me ?" Sparkle was inside of his own mind not only was he creeped out but facenatied

"Wouldn't it be obvious that I only need your body to control everything I mean I've planned this for years but there's one thing missing "

"What" sparkle was curious

"He I can't tell you that would spoil the fun of it but I'm nice I'll give you a guess "

"Okay you need a earth pony to complete a book! No that's not it to complete a cart racing team *sigh* I give up " sparkle started to think" oh how do I get out of here?"

 

Will sparkle escape his mind what does the voice have planned for his body and I am still talking like this !

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Melody staggered, shocked that she had attempted to kill Midnight. [Why did I do that? And why did I like the thought of killing her?!] She stumbled away from the pony below her, falling off the cloud. She quickly flew up to face Midnight, realizing how weak she looked now. " Just watch it. For your sake, watch what you do." She turned and saw Sparkle, unfocused, and looking as if he was falling through the cloud. Melody pushed his cloud to the ground, not sure what to do. "Does anypony know what to do? He looks like he unconscious, but not..... Rave? Do you know what's wrong with him? Oh, and you probably shouldn't talk to Midnight. She's in a really bad mood. You probably saw the whole thing from the ground, huh?"


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Melody had been standing in shock, and confusion. [What the?..... ] She snapped out of it as she heard Rave asking for help. She took off as fast as she could, cursing herself for standing there for so long. She spotted Sparkle on a cloud, and grinned with satisfaction as she saw Midnight. She quickly rush at the mare throwing her off Sparkle. "Get. Off. My. Friend! I'm glad my friends helpped me out, but I still love the idea of getting revenge you know. I'm not weak! I would let you off easy for hitting my ear. Probably just would have done the same to stand up for myself. But I told that if you mess with my friends you'd have a problem. AND YOU TRYED TO KILL SPARKLE!!! Now, you have a problem." Without warning, Melody lunged, bitteing down on her enemy's wing. Her opponent, unable to fly with her clinging on to her wing, began to fall. Melody flew up, her jaws still clamped onto Midnights wing

She dropped her on a cloud, and pinned her down. "I could break your wing. I could break your wing and let you fall to your death! How does that sound? Because this is just a warning. You won't be able to fly well for awhile. If you so much as glare at my friends again, you'll be easy to catch. I'll drag you back here, snap your wing, and drop you. If you push your luck, I might blind you before I kill you! So back off! Because next time, you WILL die. I. Don't. Warn. Twice. Remember that." With a start, she realized that she had been smiling evily while she spoke. And that she had been exited at the thought of killing the pony that was pinned beneath her. [What did I just do? I can understand threatening her, but want to kill her? And looking forward to watching her die?! I'm becoming a murder......]

 

Melody staggered, shocked that she had attempted to kill Midnight. [Why did I do that? And why did I like the thought of killing her?!] She stumbled away from the pony below her, falling off the cloud. She quickly flew up to face Midnight, realizing how weak she looked now. " Just watch it. For your sake, watch what you do." She turned and saw Sparkle, unfocused, and looking as if he was falling through the cloud. Melody pushed his cloud to the ground, not sure what to do. "Does anypony know what to do? He looks like he unconscious, but not..... Rave? Do you know what's wrong with him? Oh, and you probably shouldn't talk to Midnight. She's in a really bad mood. You probably saw the whole thing from the ground, huh?"

 

(oh dear, death threats ad blinding threats, bad choice)

 

Midnight landed next to him "sure i know what to do, i was helping till you stopped it, so yeah solve his metal issue yourself" she snorted sitting down and grooming her wing, she then got up walked over to Sparkle and slapped him hard with her hoof "snap out of it" she growled getting ready to slap him again

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Rave floated around in the darkness. He heard nothing, yet he heard everything. A lot of pain was going through. "It is time for me to take over. With everything you've been going through. With all of this stress. And with me waiting. Patiently growing stronger, I am finally ready to take over. Nothing shall stop me now". "Please don't" Rave's voice was weak, however, he did not falter. "Just stop resisting and let me "help" you. Hehehe. Do you know that your friend is in danger right now. Sparkle's. If you would stop resisting, I could help him.". "Liar" Rave yelled. "Snowflake will help me get rid of you. He said that there was a way". "Did he now. How sweet of him. And you believe him?". "Yes". "We shall see".

 

Rave was still unconscious, making no expressions what so ever. 

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Melody snarled at Midnight, and took a step forward. "That's not helping! If your trying to shock him out of it, find a different way! It's not working and you only hurting him. And that's not what you were doing before, you were going to kill him! He didn't have control! He still doesn't, and if I had let you keep 'helpping' him, he would be dead right now! And I would think about my threat if I were you. I don't just threaten ponies for fun you know." She turned to see Rave unconscious. [Great. Just, great.] She gently nugged Rave with her hoof. "Rave?" She sighed and turned to Midnight. "Do you know how to help? Without hurting them that is."


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Melody snarled at Midnight, and took a step forward. "That's not helping! If your trying to shock him out of it, find a different way! It's not working and you only hurting him. And that's not what you were doing before, you were going to kill him! He didn't have control! He still doesn't, and if I had let you keep 'helpping' him, he would be dead right now! And I would think about my threat if I were you. I don't just threaten ponies for fun you know." She turned to see Rave unconscious. [Great. Just, great.] She gently nugged Rave with her hoof. "Rave?" She sighed and turned to Midnight. "Do you know how to help? Without hurting them that is."

 

"sure, maybe he will snap out if he thinks a friend is in trouble" she replied pouncing on Melody, she pinned the pegasus down and bit her ear till it bleed the salty tang of blood making her grin, "Rave wake up now or you're friend loses her ear" she hissed before biting down harder on melody's ear causing her to scream in pain.

 

(shes soo evil XD) 

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Melody kicked the evil pegasus off. "You wish! Not a chance in Equestria am I gonna let you do that!" She dove for Midnights wing. She bit down on it hard, and started to lift her by the wing into the air. She kept bitteing harder and harder, not noticing the pony screaming at her to stop. She looked down, and dropped the wing in shock. She had bitten deeper than she had wanted to, and you could now see a bit of white bone showing. She crashed to the ground. [WHAT DID I DO?! OH CELESTIA KILL ME NOW.] She backed away in horror. "I'm sorry, I didn't mean to...." She sighed. "Ok, it's only fair I let her hurt me back. But I didn't actually rip the wing off, so no ripping off anything!" She stood still, waiting for the attack.

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Melody kicked the evil pegasus off. "You wish! Not a chance in Equestria am I gonna let you do that!" She dove for Midnights wing. She bit down on it hard, and started to lift her by the wing into the air. She kept bitteing harder and harder, not noticing the pony screaming at her to stop. She looked down, and dropped the wing in shock. She had bitten deeper than she had wanted to, and you could now see a bit of white bone showing. She crashed to the ground. [WHAT DID I DO?! OH CELESTIA KILL ME NOW.] She backed away in horror. "I'm sorry, I didn't mean to...." She sighed. "Ok, it's only fair I let her hurt me back. But I didn't actually rip the wing off, so no ripping off anything!" She stood still, waiting for the attack.

 

(warning)  

shitstorm imminent

 

 

 

Midnight lay on the floor twitching in pain, tears streamed down her face, she slowly got up glaring at the pegasus, she folded up her wings before taking several steps forwards and stopped suddenly, her right wing was neatly folded however her left wing lay sprayed out, where she had dragged it "I CAN'T FEEL MY WING" she cried glancing hopelessly at her non-responsive wing, she gave it a nudge several time and even bit the end however no pain came even when she tasted her own blood, she narrowed her eyes at Melody her red orbs blazing furiously "you" she accused.   

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Melody started to shake. "I'm sorry.... just, get on with it. Do your worst. Make it quick. Rave and Sparkle need our help. Just, don't rip off my wing. I didn't rip your off yours, but if you rip off my wings, one wing, or my ears, or one ear, I can't still rip off your wing." She laughed nervously. "To be honest, I had no idea I was that strong. But my guess is that you don't care about that, huh? And Sparkle and Rave aren't waking up. Guess you were wrong about them waking up if a friend was in danger, huh?" [i'm dead. I can't believe I did that! I deserve whatever she's gonna do. Doesn't mean I'm not terrified though.... I'm gonna miss flying. Or walking. Or breathing. Oh Celestia what did I do?]

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Snowflake breaks the 4th wall "so many events going on left and right were never going to move on with the plot at this rate" Snowflake walks over to Melody and Midnight he then stabs them both and injects them with tranquilizer "shhh shhhh its going to be all right Snowflake held them both as they collapsed" Snowflake puts his knife away "alright all hell has broken loose but at least its quiet" Snowflake looks at Aurora and Fushia "at least you two have been calm about this don't worry no one is dead not on my watch" Snowflake finds some medical supplies, and his book on advance potions and cures..... several hours later and Snowflake patches up Midnight's wing, heals Melody of any wounds she may of received, Snowflake then finishes brewing a potion and injects it into Rave "this should give him more control of himself he won't be completely free but it will help" Snowflake then looks at Sparkle "he seems to be fine he is just in another state of mind he needs rest" Snowflake sighed "thank Celestia for my skills" Snowflake takes everyone and lies them out next to one another he then sits quietly and waits for someone to wake up

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"I told you to get out " sparkle was beginning to get pushed out of his mind

"Oh no I'm not getting out you see this body is confused its trying to get us both out" the voice sniggers

"Well I'm not gonna let it push me out its gonna be you " sparkle flapped his wings as hard as he could and knocked the voice

Toward His ear "good bye he said ramming into it for a second time and it being expelled through his ear

 

*seconds later*

" what where OK I'm free " sparkle's body had accepted him and he was just waking up"whoooooooooooooooooooooooo"sparkle never feltso glad to be woken up

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Rave suddenly felt much stronger. "What is this. No. No. Noooo. Everything I have worked for will not be ruined now." The voice sounded genuinely afraid now. "I will make you pay for this" Rave reached with his magic and started to choke the voice, but soon let him go. "Even though you deserve nothing more then death after all the pain you have caused me, I am not going to let you win like that.". "Your friends are in terrible danger. I can save them. I--" "If they are in danger" interrupted Rave "then I will help them myself. As me. I will not let a stranger do the work for me, now. BEGONE". Rave started to slowly gain conscious. "Never has he attacked my mind that furiously before. Seemed like he wanted to take over my body this time. Strangely, I was able to hold out this time. I doubt this is the last of him. Should I ever be under some very big magical distress he will probably use the chance and pounce on my weak mind" he mumbled, not even sure if anyone was listening to him. 

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"ah good you guys are awake, don't worry about Melody and Midnight they were fighting one another and I had to give them both tranquilizer they will be fine though Midnight's wing is crippled I did what I could to patch it up.... she will be able to fly again but it won't be for quite some time. Now lets take another look at this map the more time we waste the less time those foals have to live" 


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"Ah yes. My map". Rave brought forth his black orb with red stripes. "This is a Magical Holographic Map, also known as MHM. In it has already been installed all the latest and newest maps and also old ones. You yourself can also add things by exploring your self and I have added a lot of more places since I have traveled a lot. This orb was very hard to come by, however, how I got the orb is a different story for another time".

 

Rave pointed his horn at the orb and the orb started to glow green, then red, then finally blue. Then from the orb lit up a holographic map of Equestria. "Here you can see the map of all of Equestria, feel free to take control of the map if there is some place that you want to see or show us. However, your control over the orb will be limited as there are some places on the map that can not be searched, unless you have my permission or it is me who is searching. Sorry for the limitation, but there are some places in Equestria that are best left alone". 

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"this is interesting" Snowflake looks at the map "so much to explore but this map..... I have never seen anything like it and I have done a lot of things you may call impossible in my time but" Snowflake regains focus "ahem.... I have explored a lot of Equestria the foal napper could be all the way to the south east in the badlands but I hear its more dangerous the the everfree forest, its all about time we need to find them before they die"


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"Hmm" sparkle was in deep thought "OK so when I was all " sparkle did what had happened when the voice got inside him " I thought of something but we'll need a history book and what better place to look for one then one of the oldest places in equestria Canterlot! *takes a really deep breath * TO THE LIBRARY!"

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Melody jumped up, hearing Spakle tell the others about going to the library. She stood in confusion, wondering how she got there, and what was happening. [Wha-? How did....? Midnight!] She turned around, expecting to the mare rush at her in an attack, and sighed in relief once she saw the mare was not going to attack. She looked at Midnights wing, and smiled. It looked almost fully healed. She then noticed all her cuts were no longer hurting. "Uh, what's going on?"


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"yeah a lot had happened so I had to inject you and Midnight with tranquilizer, the bite of my knife is forgiving so it shouldn't leave a scar and luckily for you both in my unit you need to know basic medical training things like patching up cuts, horns, wings, broken bones, well while your awake come take a look at the map" 


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"Ooh fancy" sparkle was just messing with the map and serching every where he could think of "ooh ooh fillydelphia"*map of fillydelphia comes up*" so how do I use this? Searching stuff is fun but at the moment I only know that this map is AWSOME! He he hmm I thought of something let's try searching Sparkle Sword's house *nothing* aww..... Never mind I have a plan and its useful.

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Melody walked over to the map. "Thats good. I have no idea what this map is or how it works. The foalnapper would properly go somewhere low-profile, right? Or, they might throw us off by heading somewhere really high-profile. What do you guys think?" She asked as she cast her gaze around at the other ponies. "Either way, at least one of us knows a plan. So Sparkle, what's your plan?"


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"It depends who the foalnapper is. If it is someone with little power but a lot of skill then he would go to a low profile place. If it is someone with a lot of power but little skill then he would go somewhere high-profile. If it is someone with a lot of power and lot of skill then he could go either but then it would entirely depend on the ponies way of thinking". Rave summoned up many images of different places through the orb as he spoke. Rave then looks at Sparkle. "So what is the plan? Does it involve asking your parents questions about the foalnapper, if they know someone who would hold a grudge against them? Or do you know something about the foalnapper that we could use?". 

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Rave mentioning parents reminded Snowflake of his foalhood he closes his only eye and looks away only turn his head back and reopen it "sorry, you just reminded me of something" Snowflake regains focus "judging from my previous adventures we could be dealing with a bat pony, they usually tend to attack the weak and helpless for blood..... though I haven't heard of bat pony who foalnaps" Snowflake thinks to himself and says "maybe its a bat pony using the young foal as cattle, so they won't have to hunt for blood... but hey that's just what I think it could be some guy who is taking the young ones away" 


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"ah good you guys are awake, don't worry about Melody and Midnight they were fighting one another and I had to give them both tranquilizer they will be fine though Midnight's wing is crippled I did what I could to patch it up.... she will be able to fly again but it won't be for quite some time. Now lets take another look at this map the more time we waste the less time those foals have to live" 

 

*WAKES UP*

 

"strange dream" she mutteres before glancing at the ponies, "who are you" she asked frowning before glancing at the floor, "where my cloud go, whats a foal?" she added flicking her tail

 

"huh still in a dream?" she asked herself before tearing her wing off that had no feeling, "yeah a dream, how odd" she finished

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