sad So I wrote I story I hope you guys like it!

[Luna_Dark_Lord 263]

A Sad Day in Equestria

Author: Austin P. Bates

 

 

 

 

 

For the reader: when you read this I hope you enjoy this read. I hope you the reader enjoy this short story. And this is my first story so there could be some light errors.... Thank you....

 

 

 

Prologue: before the mane six where formed and before Princess Celestia along with Princess Luna. They took back Equestria along with the Crystal Empire. Therefor this is the past, therefor can't be changed! And somepony's believe King Sombra is still here.... In the Crystal empire.... His curse will forever live on.....

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Chapter 1: the beginning:

Twilight: (reading) wow I can't believe King Sombra had control for that long!

 

(Celestia enters)

 

Celestia: Twilight my dearest student. I heard you where reading about King Sombra.

 

Twilight: oh yes I have. is it true about how you and Luna defeated him?

Celestia: yes we.... (turns away) use the elements....

Celestia: what a shame.

Twilight: it must of been hard because it says he was very dark but.... (looks at book) it says Luna defeated him... But with what?...

Celestia: he's not the only one who controls the darkness ya know.

Twilight: yes princess I know.

Twilight: uhh didn't you want to see me?

Celestia: oh right yes, it was about the elements... We way have found a trace of them but where not sure.

Twilight: I see...

Celestia: follow me twilight.

Twilight: (follows)

 

(Celestia and twilight are headed to the tree of harmony but twilight doesn't know that)

 

Celestia: here we are twilight.

Twilight: wait... What's this...I've read about this! It's the tree of harmony!

Celestia: correct but I'm not sure how we would find the elements...

Twilight: wait aren't they gone?

Celestia: according to this tree they ain't.

Twilight: well... Hugh hmmm led me take a look.

Celestia: be carful.

Twilight: (walks around the tree)

Twilight: hmm nothing's here Celestia

Celestia: I'm going to head off I will see you soon twilight...

Twilight: ok celestia.

 

(Celestia exits)

(Twilight exits)

(Day ends)

 

((This is an update of the story))

Edited November 4, 2014 by vinyl_scratch_4_life

[twilightfan28 52]

eh... its not bad.... definitely not the worst though

[GuyNamedEarl 1,332]

Not the worst thing I've seen today.