my first pony drawing

[JhonHipster 124]

i consider it preety good being done with paint, just need to work on the shape, her face looks a little deformed.

[Dragonshy 2,305]

lol cool

 

[Skye Starlight 223]

Head more rounded, with the ear positioned a bit more forward and the proportions are all you have to work on... The muzzle (nose) is also a bit big, and the iris (the color of the eye) should come all the way around evenly. It's really good for a first drawing though! I wasn't even that good on my first try! I just couldn't do anything right at first, but I found out how to better myself, and now I draw nearly cartoon perfect! My only problems are the limbs, especially wings! and manes of a few ponies... They are just so hard to draw! Especially Rarity's and Pinkie's!

 

I hope my criticism helped... I don't usually crit unless I think it may help a bit...

[EWAN 31]

I think its good for a first drawing sense you used paint (I'm terrible at using paint)

keep at it!!!

Edited April 5, 2012 by 117EWAN

[~Chaos~ 3,967]

Good job for your first one! and on paint too, keep it up

[JhonHipster 124]

second attempt, this time full body, because of the zoom ability of paint he eyes and head in general turned out terrible.

[Chimicherrychanga! 41]

The head didn't turn out terrible!! They're just a little squared.