Fluttershy Drawing

[Twisted Cyclone 🚓 6,269]

Today I decided to draw Fluttershy. For the most part I think it turned out decent. I like it. What are your thoughts on it. As always critiques are welcome.

 

[Comrade Courage 653]

her hair is a little big on top (some people like big hair  ) but other than that great job I love it

[_Kurtis 636]

What a marvelous drawing! Fluttershy looks absolutely adorable.   

[Twisted Cyclone 🚓 6,269]

her hair is a little big on top (some people like big hair  ) but other than that great job I love it

Thank you for the feedback. I appreciate it.

 

 

What a marvelous drawing! Fluttershy looks absolutely adorable.   

Thank you. I'm glad you like it.

[Jonny Music 3,496]

It's good. But the size proportions of the mane are a little too big compared to the mane on the original vector of Fluttershy (used in the show).

 

Otherwise, it's good.

[lync 68]

It looks good and have great coolors but the neck is a bit long, from what i have read the neck should be the same length of the body (not including princess celestia)

[Veritum 258]

Hey! I can definitely see you've improved a lot. Only critiques are:

 

1) Neck is too long, and should be slightly "less thick" on the outward side

2) Head could be slightly more circular (specifically the lower jaw area)

3) Between the front and back leg the body curves up higher near the back leg (so it's slightly higher than the body near the front leg)

4) Neck should be at a more "straight up" angle unless her head is more forward than usual

5) Upper-back of the body should be slightly more curved downwards

6) Hair could be slightly smaller, or at least curve the upper mane down a bit sooner.

 

Just my personal opinions, but honestly great work. Any of these critiques are fairly minor, so don't be discouraged at all. I look forward to seeing how you do in the future

(You nailed the eyes though, good job. I the eyes are one of the hardest parts to get perfect )

Edited January 10, 2015 by qMotus

[Twisted Cyclone 🚓 6,269]

It's good. But the size proportions of the mane are a little too big compared to the mane on the original vector of Fluttershy (used in the show).

 

Otherwise, it's good.

Thank you for the feedback.

 

 

It looks good and have great coolors but the neck is a bit long, from what i have read the neck should be the same length of the body (not including princess celestia)

Thanks for the feedback.

 

 

Hey! I can definitely see you've improved a lot. Only critiques are:

 

1) Neck is too long, and should be slightly "less thick" on the outward side

2) Head could be slightly more circular (specifically the lower jaw area)

3) Between the front and back leg the body curves up higher near the back leg (so it's slightly higher than the body near the front leg)

4) Neck should be at a more "straight up" angle unless her head is more forward than usual

5) Upper-back of the body should be slightly more curved downwards

6) Hair could be slightly smaller, or at least curve the upper mane down a bit sooner.

 

Just my personal opinions, but honestly great work. Any of these critiques are fairly minor, so don't be discouraged at all. I look forward to seeing how you do in the future

(You nailed the eyes though, good job. I the eyes are one of the hardest parts to get perfect )

Hey no worries on me feeling discourage. I appreciate all the feedback. I'll definitely draw some more so stay tuned.

[Neutral 1,185]

Well as usual good sir I love the drawings. This one is also very good. Keep it up man.

[RainbowTashie 379]

It looks awesome try using circles to get perfect body proportion

[Twisted Cyclone 🚓 6,269]

Well as usual good sir I love the drawings. This one is also very good. Keep it up man.

Thank you I appreciate that. I will continue to draw. No worries.

 

 

It looks awesome try using circles to get perfect body proportion

Thanks for the feedback.

[Wicked Funky 2,956]

Nice drawing! Yay

 

One thing you could train on is drawing more fluid lines