Comrade Courage 653 January 10, 2015 Share January 10, 2015 hope you like it I may do a little work on it I don't really like how much she contrasts with the clouds but I drew and colored them both separately anyway enjoy and please give feedback thanks /) 11 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Valormos 262 January 10, 2015 Share January 10, 2015 Nice work the wings are great but you should made her belly and hind legs thinner and her head bigger but overall well done 1 §*ADVENTURE TIME*§ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Christmasy Britty 2,553 January 10, 2015 Share January 10, 2015 very nicely done she's a little fat in the stomach but we'll just say she had a massive lunch 1 signature by Pucksterv Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Comrade Courage 653 January 10, 2015 Author Share January 10, 2015 Nice work the wings are great but you should made her belly and hind legs thinner and her head bigger but overall well done yeah I really like her wings surprisingly they were the easiest. and thanks I didn't notice the rest always good to have a fresh pair of eyes. I also wish I had done more shading but such as life very nicely done she's a little fat in the stomach but we'll just say she had a massive lunch yeah that works thanks 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Neutral 1,185 January 10, 2015 Share January 10, 2015 I am liking this drawing good sir. God job. 1 Credit to Rainbowdash72 for sig credit to Ivory for the amazing avatar credit to couleur for the wallpaper if your in hell keep going Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Comrade Courage 653 January 11, 2015 Author Share January 11, 2015 I am liking this drawing good sir. God job. yeah I do it for the likes /) 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Iris_ 136 January 11, 2015 Share January 11, 2015 Did you draw the clouds too? It looks like a photograph or at least a completely different style, so that is probably why it contrasts so much. Her body also does look a bit too "fat" and the overall shape looks a bit wonky. Right now her stomach and most of her upper body is wider than her hips, try curving inwards over the hips and give her a thinner body maybe? And always remember to find reference if you are unsure or don't know how to draw something, it helps a lot. I found these for you really quick but I am sure you can find better ones if you go look for it: http://fc03.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2012/287/a/9/rainbow_dash_flying_1_by_dasduriel-d5dmhje.png http://fc08.deviantart.net/fs70/i/2012/201/f/7/rainbow_dash_fly_by_by_kylineponies-d5818hs.png 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Comrade Courage 653 January 11, 2015 Author Share January 11, 2015 (edited) Did you draw the clouds too? It looks like a photograph or at least a completely different style, so that is probably why it contrasts so much. Her body also does look a bit too "fat" and the overall shape looks a bit wonky. Right now her stomach and most of her upper body is wider than her hips, try curving inwards over the hips and give her a thinner body maybe? And always remember to find reference if you are unsure or don't know how to draw something, it helps a lot. I found these for you really quick but I am sure you can find better ones if you go look for it: http://fc03.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2012/287/a/9/rainbow_dash_flying_1_by_dasduriel-d5dmhje.png http://fc08.deviantart.net/fs70/i/2012/201/f/7/rainbow_dash_fly_by_by_kylineponies-d5818hs.png yeah I drew everything in this and I know what you mean my style with the clouds is so different than drawing dash I think your right they look so different they just clash so I am gonna have to work on it as well her shape is a little "wonky" but hopefully next time everything will be a little more seamless ( PS the clouds are different cause I used paint.net instead of drawing them first) I really appreciate the feedback you are totally right /) Edited January 11, 2015 by Comrade Courage Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Twisted Cyclone 🚓 6,261 January 11, 2015 Share January 11, 2015 That is a great drawing!! Nice job on it. 1 Country and Rock fan | Car fan (especially police cars) | Weather Pony | YouTube | Twitter | DeviantART Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Iris_ 136 January 11, 2015 Share January 11, 2015 yeah I drew everything in this and I know what you mean my style with the clouds is so different than drawing dash I think your right they look so different they just clash so I am gonna have to work on it as well her shape is a little "wonky" but hopefully next time everything will be a little more seamless ( PS the clouds are different cause I used paint.net instead of drawing them first) I really appreciate the feedback you are totally right /) No problem =p That you used paint.net for the clouds explains why it looks different then yeah. The clouds look good though on their own it's just the combination that clashes like you say. I wish you luck in your next drawing, I'm sure it will go well, and by asking people for feedback and listening to it the way you are doing now is going to make you improve even faster. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Comrade Courage 653 January 11, 2015 Author Share January 11, 2015 No problem =p That you used paint.net for the clouds explains why it looks different then yeah. The clouds look good though on their own it's just the combination that clashes like you say. I wish you luck in your next drawing, I'm sure it will go well, and by asking people for feedback and listening to it the way you are doing now is going to make you improve even faster. I hope so, I really do appreciate it I want to get better anyway I can 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RainbowTashie 378 January 11, 2015 Share January 11, 2015 hope you like it I may do a little work on it I don't really like how much she contrasts with the clouds but I drew and colored them both separately anyway enjoy and please give feedback thanks /) Those wings Rainbow is that you who knew you could make Dashie look so elegant 1 Sig tweaked to perfection by Coby! My facebook page: https://www.facebook.com/pages/Bronies-Pegasisters-and-Pok%C3%A9mon-masters/901873019878238 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Comrade Courage 653 January 11, 2015 Author Share January 11, 2015 Those wings Rainbow is that you who knew you could make Dashie look so elegant it is her she has always been that elegant she just needed to let it shine through Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RainbowTashie 378 January 11, 2015 Share January 11, 2015 Those wings Rainbow is that you who knew you could make Dashie look so elegant I think Rarity would have a tear in her eye if she saw that! either that or pass out i'm not quite sure but she'd be happy ;D 1 Sig tweaked to perfection by Coby! My facebook page: https://www.facebook.com/pages/Bronies-Pegasisters-and-Pok%C3%A9mon-masters/901873019878238 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Comrade Courage 653 January 18, 2015 Author Share January 18, 2015 I think Rarity would have a tear in her eye if she saw that! either that or pass out i'm not quite sure but she'd be happy ;D oh gosh I hope she would be ok!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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