Help needed with a Fallout Equestria Sidefic I'm writing

[Zantetsuken 364]

I've been putting this off for a while.... A long while. Mainly because I really don't know what good posting here will do, but I thought I would try it anyway. Since your here I might as well tell you what this thread is about.

 

I have been looking for Editors and critique on the fic lately, it went public in March. I have a very VERY strong desire to make this fic something worth reading, something worth someone's time and I need editors for that. People who know what they are doing and all that. I had some strong players, but real life got a bit too busy for them and they had to quit. I've asked everywhere you can imagine, and now here, at this point I feel I'm running out of options.

 

I also feel the fic has been lacking Critique. I haven't really gotten any unbais reviews about it, so it's kind of hard to know what people are thinking. The first 2 chapters are up on Fimfiction right now, if anyone cares to read them, there is also a link at the bottom. If anyone here cares and wants to help me out, I guess that would be pretty cool. I mean, I feel like I'm running out of options here cause let me tell you, I have tried many a place, and people, so far.       

 

http://www.fimfiction.net/story/254246/fallout-equestria-hidden-enemies

 

   

[JonasDarkmane 19,788]

Well, I do reviews and I can do critique

[Zantetsuken 364]

Well, I do reviews and I can do critique

Any kind of reception from someone I don't know would be nice at this point in time. 

[JonasDarkmane 19,788]

Any kind of reception from someone I don't know would be nice at this point in time. 

I will read this then, I have read the introduction and I already see some things I will point out. 

I've done a review on the first chapter.