[WIP]-Jasper-Looking for Opinions

[Tiny Hooves 28]

This is a song I made for an old friend who is a furry. I know this isn't brony music, but I would really appreciate opinions considering I have had some great opinions from this site on some old songs I made before. Any opinion is a good opinion, good, bad, or ugly, as long as it's constructive. I really appreciate any help.

[Mostavus_Doo 21]

Hey, I love furries!  I don't really know how much of a critique I could give.  It's a chill tune, but I guess if I could ask for anything, it would be more layers and some harmonies thrown in there too.  But that's just my personal preference.