Critique and Name my OC

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Sooooo I made up a new OC on my down time... She's a tap dancing pegasus.

Anywho, I was wondering if I could get some critique on my sketch about her anatomy (especially the wings though they are meant to be angled that way)

I also need a name for her! I was thinking something along the lines of Tipitty Tap or something... >___<;;;

[Aureity 3,055]

Wind Tapper?

I have no idea..I'm bad with names.

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Wind Tapper?

I have no idea..I'm bad with names.

 

That's actually a cute name! X3

[I used to be a stranger 7,993]

Feathers appear to be too sharp, round them a bit more.

The mane is an interesting and likable choice, however the fraying in my personal observance seems a tad distracting with its elements: Truncate the first fray so it goes /- instead of / because otherwise it looks sort of like a horn. Also ensure that if you do truncate it, it still matches the overall outline curvature limit of the mane. The two frays at the back seem a bit too curved compared to the others.

Overall, the mane either should be a bit curvier like the tail, or make the tail slightly more angular in some way (as un-specific as that is)

 

Tip-Tappers

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Feathers appear to be too sharp, round them a bit more.

The mane is an interesting and likable choice, however the fraying in my personal observance seems a tad distracting with its elements: Truncate the first fray so it goes /- instead of / because otherwise it looks sort of like a horn. Also ensure that if you do truncate it, it still matches the overall outline curvature limit of the mane. The two frays at the back seem a bit too curved compared to the others.

Overall, the mane either should be a bit curvier like the tail, or make the tail slightly more angular in some way (as un-specific as that is)

 

Tip-Tappers

 

The tail I am most definitely changing to match the mane. I'm not even sure why I made it so curly-whirl in the first place... HMMM! Maybe because I'm biased and like wavy things.

Anywho, as per the mane, I definitely see where you are coming from on that! I'll cut off the pointed part and keep it less like a horn and more like a Mohawk C:

Ah! And the wings. Yes. I will surely make them less sharp and pointy!

 

Thank you for your feedback <3

 

And... Tip-Tappers is pretty adorable

[Prince Midnight 817]

wow, thats really really cool ^^

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wow, thats really really cool ^^

 

Thank you! C:

[Prince Midnight 817]

Thank you! C:

 

wish i could draw that well XD, but umm, the only name im coming up with is sky tapper

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wish i could draw that well XD, but umm, the only name im coming up with is sky tapper

 

Sky Tapper is pretty cute! O: I like it!

[Prince Midnight 817]

Sky Tapper is pretty cute! O: I like it!

 

YAY ^^