reDerpy lost muffin! Critique plz. :)

[Onylex 2,837]

This is actually an old drawing that I decided to color digitally.

 

In the original I used watercolor but always felt as if it looked slightly off. I guess you could say that its a rework of color style, although I still wanted to keep the watercolor look of the original so I did the best that I could to mimic the texture with a couple of brushes. 

 

Anyway thanks for viewing and if you happen to have a critique or comment for me it would be much appreciated. (though one is not needed)  :grin2:

 

[碇 シンジン 27,440]

 she goes after that muffin creating a sonic muffinboom and  saves the  muffin <3

 

Beautiful drawing my friend =)=)=)=)=)=)=)=) Lovely cute drawing this is =)=)=)=)=)<3

[Hazy Skies 1,010]

Amazing Looks awesome, with lots of detail ⁿ-ⁿ

I especially like all the feathers on the wings

 

The only thing I think looks a little off is the little inward ridge thingy on her back..

Not sure there should be one there.. or at least lighter in color..

But that's just my thoughts on it..

 

Keep up the good work

Edited August 12, 2015 by AURAequine

[GuyNamedEarl 1,332]

Lol NO NOT THE MUFFINS Looks really good btw

[dragonsponies 101]

there's a couple of things that i think could use improvement but yu said you wanted a qritique so i'm assumin you're okay with any kind of feedback.

as AURAequine said the ridgeline on her back would seem appropriate due to her position. she ducked down entirely so her back would be arched in a such a way the you could possibly see that line. though unlike humans the spine of a horse/ a lot of animals is more directed outward. therefor giving her that ridgeline makes her back seem like it is that of a human.

 

furthermore the eyes seem rather emotionless. there are tears but the lack of expression makes it seem like she's crying while really remaining neutral. which would be fine in this scenario. though then there's to much tears...

 

her hind legs/hooves seem twisted in an unnatural way. possibly because there's a black line in the seperation of the hoof and the flank. 

 

and one final thing that slightly bothers me is the lines that indicate a change in shape on the clouds. the points where her hooves are making contact with the cloud (i'm assuming) are sort of caving in to show that there's weight on the cloud from where her hoof is placed. though it's better to show this change in height by using shading rather then those lines.

 

sorry if any of this seems harsh or anything, but at the end of the day it's only a matter of opinion. on top of that i can't even draw as good as you can at the moment so my advice isn't really worth that much. 

hope this was still helpfull in some way

[yeet 2,027]

Then twilight levitates it back up, because derpship. 

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there's a couple of things that i think could use improvement but yu said you wanted a qritique so i'm assumin you're okay with any kind of feedback.

as AURAequine said the ridgeline on her back would seem appropriate due to her position. she ducked down entirely so her back would be arched in a such a way the you could possibly see that line. though unlike humans the spine of a horse/ a lot of animals is more directed outward. therefor giving her that ridgeline makes her back seem like it is that of a human.

 

furthermore the eyes seem rather emotionless. there are tears but the lack of expression makes it seem like she's crying while really remaining neutral. which would be fine in this scenario. though then there's to much tears...

 

her hind legs/hooves seem twisted in an unnatural way. possibly because there's a black line in the seperation of the hoof and the flank. 

 

and one final thing that slightly bothers me is the lines that indicate a change in shape on the clouds. the points where her hooves are making contact with the cloud (i'm assuming) are sort of caving in to show that there's weight on the cloud from where her hoof is placed. though it's better to show this change in height by using shading rather then those lines.

 

sorry if any of this seems harsh or anything, but at the end of the day it's only a matter of opinion. on top of that i can't even draw as good as you can at the moment so my advice isn't really worth that much. 

hope this was still helpfull in some way

 

Nah, the only type of critique I don't think Id be able to get much use out of is one that is blind criticism. 

Constructive critiques on the other hand are always appreciated and very helpful. 

 

They allow me to see what I did wrong and take into account any suggestions for the next go around. If I'm only ever told what I did wrong with no word or thought on how I can improve/better my work than its just something I can't find use in as a critique.

 

Thanks for the comment by the way, it was very helpful.