Harcourt by Gaviera (Looking for Criticism, Tips, Examination)

[Gaviera 52]

I'm not really used to getting criticism, or even posting work online, let alone even use a forum, but, hey, I want to use everything I possibly could to get better. Anyway, onto the drawing.

 

Let's see, this is from my Request Guild thread. I wish I had made a background for this, but unfortunately, it wasn't planned for in the early stage, so I  didn't add it later, and it's also missing some colour, which I also want to learn, but some other time. My primary concerns are lack of efficiency and cleanliness, though I am sure there are more issues. Also, still a little green to tablets.

 

Also, by lack of efficiency, I of course, mean, with lines, too, though I AM a fan of complexity, but I mean more about the glaring issue that this took me literally 15 hours

 

If any of you artists out there can find anything else worth mentioning, please do, and thank you for examining my work.

 

Here's the image.

 

Edited September 17, 2015 by Gaviera

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Just letting you know this has been moved as requested.