writing Lost Hope...

[Nightfall 3,950]

Aight, everpony

So I'm writing a new story called "Lost Hope." It's kinda based off of MLP...

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Basic storyline:

Four species co-exist on the ten level, city-like planet of Elusia. The humans seemingly have nothing special about them... then there are the Fliers, humans with wings sprouting out of their backs. The Sorcerers come next, looking like the humans, but having special magic powers. Finally, the rare Magisi, a mix between the Fliers and Sorcerers. Only three are known to exist: two are royal princesses, and the other is "just another citizen of Elusia." The third's name is Nightfall, and he was believed to be dead for the past three years...

When the story opens, Nightfall and his friends Shadowblast, a Flier, Silverstorm, a Sorcerer, and Shefira, another Flier, try to free the princesses, Princess Starfire and Princess Moonlight, from Mastaruk and Captain Shera, who plan to take over the government.

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So how do you guys like it? If you want, I can post sections here. Until then, post your suggestions on what will happen and they might make it into the story!