visual art Undertale - Muffet {completed}

[Plume 922]

Heya peeps! I haven't posted anything I've drawn on here in a long time, and I'm here to remedy that! I've been meaning to draw my spider waifu for a while now, and I finally got around to it - I was originally going to make it digital, but my paper sketchbook just called to me ^^"

 

Anyway, here she is! Sorry in advance for the somewhat ishy photo.

 

 

 

 

I know it's far from perfect, and, if possible, could someone give me some critique/advice on it? Also, do you think it would look better coloured or just as is? I'm not sure what to do.



UPDATE:

I coloured and edited it slightly!

 

 

 

 

 

Edited December 14, 2015 by MiniKirby123

[Vulcan 3,254]

If I could brohoof a post twice, I would! XD 

 

 

Critique: The middle arms are a little off but you captured everything else so well that I didn't notice till I was actually looking for any flaws . XD

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I think that this is really good if you keep up the work like this you could try tatoo's.

 

Critique: you did a really good job but what got my attention was the shoes. The shoes are not lined out from were the ankle is. The rest of the drawing is amazing and you should do more