critique wanted My first attempt at Cartoon Eyes.

[Chara 1,565]

So I decided I wanted to attempt Cartoon eyes and I cannot find any problems besides the left eye and the left eyebrow (out of place), any suggestions on what I can do better?

 

Edited December 23, 2015 by Zach

[PacificGreen 1,163]

Not bad, though there are a few noticeable smudges, along with the overlap between the eye outline and the shadow outline.

 

So just so I can understand how you're doing this: did you use a vector or raster program? Looks like raster but I'm not quite sure.

[Kadae 655]

Aside from a few overlapping lines here and there, they're looking fine for simplistic cartoon eyes. My only major criticism is that the outline looks inconsistently blurred, which is a bit odd-looking.

 

I think it'd also be helpful to see them drawn onto a complete face just to see how well you can make them sit around other facial features.

[Starlet Harmony 128]

The shading is amazing. You are on the right track my friend!