critique wanted How can I make my art better?

[Vampira Heart 920]

I drew this and I was wondering if anypony could tell me what I could improve on it

[Kafooku 156]

It looks really good!

 

However, with the wing, I would move it lower and more on the side of the body. The head seems to be good, but it looks like he's missing part of his skull on the back of his neck. The mouth could also be moved up a little, unless that's how you want to place it. Additionally, the roots where the tail comes out seems really thing compared to the rest of the pony. I should also mention that his foreleg's shoulder seems a bit 'small' or oddly shaped.

 

These are just my opinions, you definitely don't have to take them into account or change anything.

 

Overall, just practice anatomy and look at examples because it looks like you're trying to go for the show's style?

 

Good luck! Keep drawin'!

[Vampira Heart 920]

Thanks for the advice how's this?

[Kafooku 156]

Thanks for the advice how's this?

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Looks better! You'll be more awesome at art in no time. Just keep practicing.

[rainbowfast87 11]

This looks AMAZING! Just a few little things, though.

 

First, I think you need a little bit of work on your wings, mane, and tail.

 

 

Other than this, your drawing is GREAT!