private Echoes in the Summer Sun

[Mentis Soliloquy 3,025]

"I want you to bite me like that, I hate it when your rough on me, if I have to be fed on i'd like to feel good too." She looked at Deja and kissed her cheek. then lay her head on her chest. "you...you can bite me now if you want it's been a few days and I am the one in the wrong so..."

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"You aren't the wrong one here,love...I attached that pony and you as well....I'm sorry", she said and lightly kissed her neck. "Can...can I", she started to ask but quietly face in to her urges and lightly bit into her neck. "I love you with every once of my soul, Summer...I'm sorry I hurt you", she thought to the mare as she fed.

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Summer replied in her mind, "just well I know, you are being gentle and it feels nice so...I love you too." Summer's breath was shallow and quick but she was enjoying the experance so was smiling at Deja watching her with the one eye that she could, her heart began to race.

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Deja fed slowly and lovingly as she held the made in her hooves. She finally released her fangs from Summer's neck and kissed her as she licked up the excess blood. "I love you....I needed that, I will be honest", she said quietly and snuggled up next to her, her eyes closed as she lay beside her love not wishing to apoil their moment.

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Summer was a little worn from the feeding from both of them, put her legs around Deja and closed her own eyes she was smiling but sleep was calling her name. "your sunshine is worn out now me go sleepies now, night my loves." Within a moment the yellow pegasi was fast asleep.

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Deja smiled half heartedly and kissed her ear lightly and fell quickly asleep beside her, not waking until the morning sun had finally risen on them. She had overslept, not planning the spend the night to give her marefriend space but they had fallen asleep so her plans had gone for it the window.

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Summer woke to still find Deja next to her, "morning Deja, any plans for this lovely day that Celestia has given us?" Summer licked her nose playfully and moved her wing and picked up Deja's one and wrapped her main feather around her wing, the two of them intertwining.

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Deja smiled at the tamder nose lick and returned the favor as she allowed Sumwmr to handle her wing which still felt rather odd on her sides. "I must get back to Canterlot today, have a delivery I must make certain has not been in any way damaged, you understand how it is", she said calmly.

Edited February 4, 2016 by dusk shade

[Mentis Soliloquy 3,025]

"ok then." Summer let go of her wing. "let me come with you let's go back to the capitol I can help you with your art, despite that you have magic and I don't guess i can look pretty for you?" Summer looked a little disheartened she could really do little apart from just being some company.  

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Deja smiled at her offer and didn't want to shut her down so of course she quickly agreed. "Certainly, it can be quote boring to wait on the inspectors to do their jobs so maybe we can break for a meal then and hopefully when we return they will be finished with their oh so important work", she said as she brushed out her mane and tail.

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Summer got up and looked in the mirror she looked fine in her eyes but looked back to Deja. "you want to mess with my mane and tail so I look acceptable in Canterlot I don't want to give the snobs any ammo if I can help it, it's not good for you they would think poorly of you dating a farm mare." Summer picked up a brush and help it out for her.

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She only shook her head and smiled at the mare. "No, of course I don't want to do that. I love you just the way you are. You haven't made me change my Canterlot ways for your ponyville life and I will not do that to you. Please trust that I am happy with you as you are", she said and finished her own mane and tail, then targeting her coat. "Shall we"?

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"you sure, I mean it's no bother I have my mane like this because I can't think of anything to do with it so i just tie it up, I'm not offended or anything if you want to change me a little I changed you a lot I mean your dead now remember, what is a little hair change compared to that?"

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"I don't want to change you. I love you, can't you see that", she asked and kisses her deeply. "I mean it, I mean, I could let it down and dress it into a bow for you if you like, you would be quite presentable for Canterlot standards and you would certainly be as pretty as you are now, maybe I could handle your tail as well...", it was clear the mare had wanted to have a go at her tail and mane for a while.

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Summer took the kiss, she loved the ones that came from no where, she pulled back. "I know you do, but please it's fine my pride is not being wounded you change what you want, I don't want to make any waves for you, please Deja it's fine fiddle with my hair." she put the brush in Deja's hoof.

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Deja nodded and started to work at the mare's mane and quickly set into a bow, leaving a well brushed ponytail laying to left side of her head. She then grabbed her fail and set it Ina split ponytail, a fine wrap around the hairs and set her in front of the mirror to let see the work.

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"wow I look like I live in Canterlot now, I should not get any funny looks now thanks love." Summer turned and kissed Deja deeply then after nearly falling over together she walked to the door. "let us be off to Canterlot then shall we love, it's good I can keep an eye on you."

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Deja smiled in relief that Summer had liked how she looked and led her out to the train station, waiting for the machine to arrive. "Do you really think I'm still so untrustworthy that you have to watch me like a foal sitter", she asked her lover quietly as they waited.

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"No, I think I sacred you enough that you won't do anything but I'm just being careful I suppose please don't take it to heart, It's just a small side note to being with you I should not of said that I have not shaken your confidence have I?" Summer gave her a peck on the cheek, "is that ok for Canterlot?"

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Deja looked at her with a clear sense of nervousness as the train came into the station. She pushed her scarf to her muzzle blocking her nose of any smells of blood as they boarded and only once seated did she respond to Summer. "That peck you gave me will be fine in Canterlot, a small feature of affection isn't usually viewed as inappropriate, no worries".

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"good, but you don't need to cover you nose like that anyway it won't help out sense of smell is too good, stop worrying you went days without blood and you were on the platform with not a care in the world stop thinking about it, remember like a scratch ignore it and it goes away." She smiled and held her hoof as they sat and pulled down her scarf and then the blinds in the compartment. "OH I want to kiss you some more before we get there." Summer pushed her down and the made out for at least half the trip to Canterlot.

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Deja didn't trust herself after what Summer had said and didn't want to a mell the air bit she was right. Deja could smell all of the blood of the ponies on the train and on the platform. She let Summer pull her scarf away and looked at her curiously as she sniffed the air for ng herlsef not to worry about the scent as she was surprised by Summer's sudden make out attack and she held her until they reached Canterlot.

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Summer was lying on top of her as they got to the station she hoped off and she gave her a smile, she was going to get her mind of it Deja was her own worst enemy. "so what is going to be happening today then with these inspectors is it, what are the inspecting for?"

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Deja got herself up onto her hooves and smiled an embarrassed smile. "Well, it's their job to make sure the pieces have no imperfections, make sure they are authentic, no damage, that sort of thing", she explained as she went to work fixing both of their manes and tails before they got off the train.

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"well come on then let's not keep them waiting and when we are done have some food and remember to send that portrait of my cousin home too." Summer smiled and they hopped of the train and started for Deja's art gallery, "are these inspectors snobs too do you know?"