critique wanted 'Second' Attempt at Drawing a Pony (critiques?)

[Kafooku 156]

Hi! I've recently begun the never-ending quest of trying to draw ponies! Anyways, what are your thoughts? What can I improve on? etc. Aside from the obvious things. Also, sorry about the messy lines and stuff, this was kinda just a sketch to see what I needed to improve on.

 

 

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[Sir Xarthas VI 470]

For a rough sketch, this seems to be quite alright. Other than the nozzle (nose) being a bit bulbous/protruding, and the ear (to the right) having a bit of a stretching problem.

If you were to clean up the lines, add in some shading, you wouldn't actually have to change much.

Edited January 21, 2016 by ~ Akatsuki ~

[El Duderino 879]

Looks good. Remember it doesn't need to be exactly like the show. Imperfections don't make a drawing bad, they give it character. All the imperfections make it your own unique style.

[Kafooku 156]

  On 2016-01-21 at 7:02 AM, ~ Akatsuki ~ said:

For a rough sketch, this seems to be quite alright. Other than the nozzle (nose) being a bit bulbous/protruding, and the ear (to the right) having a bit of a stretching problem.

If you were to clean up the lines, add in some shading, you wouldn't actually have to change much.

Thank you! I totally agree with all your points as I'm looking back. (Especially the 'nose'.)

 

  On 2016-01-21 at 7:10 AM, El Duderino said:

Looks good. Remember it doesn't need to be exactly like the show. Imperfections don't make a drawing bad, they give it character. All the imperfections make it your own unique style.

Thank you, I'm trying to go for a style that's kinda following the show, but has a bit more... 'Fluff'.

[cookiequester 32]

I love it actually, I think you could make this your own style if you wanted to.