IAmArtsDesire 306 February 22, 2016 Share February 22, 2016 I really do stink at titles, but I'm here with some more art, so... yeah. Alright, I got a few commissions, fun thing, fanart, all that stuff. Only 9 images. Some have speed-paints as well. There is also 1 or 2 line-less in there I was experimenting with. So, here we go. I highly appreciate feedback, so feel free to give constructive criticism. Thank y'all! Original--->http://iamartsdesire.deviantart.com/art/Commission-for-Sawyer-Backlash-and-Yew-Longbow-582457543?q=gallery%3AIAmArtsDesire%2F50404877&qo=15 Original--->http://iamartsdesire.deviantart.com/art/Commission-for-Parrotz123-Wildragon-584639404?q=gallery%3AIAmArtsDesire%2F50404877&qo=13 Original--->http://iamartsdesire.deviantart.com/art/Fnaf-Themed-Stream-SpeedPaint-584841140?q=gallery%3AIAmArtsDesire%2F50404877&qo=12 SpeedPaint: https://youtu.be/xWwcrTkByWs Original--->http://iamartsdesire.deviantart.com/art/Celestia-586292086?q=gallery%3AIAmArtsDesire%2F50404877&qo=10 Original--->http://iamartsdesire.deviantart.com/art/Commission-for-IAmGamerFun-GamerFun-587327977?q=gallery%3AIAmArtsDesire%2F50404877&qo=7 Original--->http://iamartsdesire.deviantart.com/art/Spotted-Feather-588696328?q=gallery%3AIAmArtsDesire%2F50404877&qo=6 Original--->http://iamartsdesire.deviantart.com/art/Spotted-Feather-589430099?q=gallery%3AIAmArtsDesire%2F50404877&qo=4 Original--->http://iamartsdesire.deviantart.com/art/Commission-for-Dice-Warwick-Vibraphone-Echo-590988550?q=gallery%3AIAmArtsDesire%2F50404877&qo=3 SpeedPaint: https://youtu.be/9ti8xMhqqkY Original--->http://iamartsdesire.deviantart.com/art/Luna-Why-SpeedPaint-592302501?q=gallery%3AIAmArtsDesire%2F50404877&qo=0 SpeedPaint: https://youtu.be/b_StURyGS4A 5 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
On-Locoweed 108 February 22, 2016 Share February 22, 2016 You may want to make the highlights on the eyes opaque instead of showing the area of iris and pupil underneath them. I would typically defer such a detail to a question of personal style, but since the highlights are supposed to be external phenomena on the eye (and not simply an arbitrary matter of anatomy), they should function the same way they do in the show, so consider making them completely white so that one can't see the parts they are supposed to obscure anyway. Apologies if this sounds too prosaic or critical, it's just the monotone, accusatory filter provided with Internet communication. 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cuteycindyhoney 13,339 February 22, 2016 Share February 22, 2016 The very first one "Backlash and Yew Longbow" is so adorable. I like how you portray them as touching noses like that. It's very cute! The stylized Celestia is really nice too. I like how she's framed by her mane and tail. 1 Thank you Sparklefan1234!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
IAmArtsDesire 306 February 24, 2016 Author Share February 24, 2016 These are all very nice. I like the style in which you draw ponies! Please keep up the great work. I'd love to see more from you in the future! :grin2: Thanks! And I shall defiantly try! You may want to make the highlights on the eyes opaque instead of showing the area of iris and pupil underneath them. I would typically defer such a detail to a question of personal style, but since the highlights are supposed to be external phenomena on the eye (and not simply an arbitrary matter of anatomy), they should function the same way they do in the show, so consider making them completely white so that one can't see the parts they are supposed to obscure anyway. Apologies if this sounds too prosaic or critical, it's just the monotone, accusatory filter provided with Internet communication. Alright... I'll give it a go. I usually think of it as light reflecting off the eye, so in my mind they would not be completely opaque, and thus I decrease the opacity a little. The very first one "Backlash and Yew Longbow" is so adorable. I like how you portray them as touching noses like that. It's very cute! The stylized Celestia is really nice too. I like how she's framed by her mane and tail. Thank you. Backlash and Yew Longbow were commission. It was enjoyable and still one I really do like personally. The Celestia was just an experiment, as we had just learned how to properly shade in my Visual Art class, figured I'd give it a try digitally. I think it worked out okay. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
On-Locoweed 108 February 24, 2016 Share February 24, 2016 Alright... I'll give it a go. I usually think of it as light reflecting off the eye, so in my mind they would not be completely opaque, and thus I decrease the opacity a little. Yeah, it is light reflecting off the eye, and that's what I meant by their being external phenomena and not arbitrary. All ponies who have highlights on their eyes will have opaque highlights since it's a regularized characteristic. (You should make the final call, but I presume you want them to appear as they would in the show, operating under those particular physics) One would not be able to see what's underneath the light reflection because it's pure light. So, that's why I suggested that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kenshiro 13,499 February 24, 2016 Share February 24, 2016 These are very nice pieces my friend. You got a serious talent and i hope we can see more from you in the future ''' Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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