OC redesign, thoughts?

[Howling Voice 77]

Another character for my potential blog.

This guys name is Cray, he's an Alicorn representing change, his cutie mark is an oroboros, i wanted ot keep it pretty simple but his main talent is alchemy. (Before you ask, no it's not from FMA, but I do like that series!).

Cray's a large, bulky guy, he looks intimidatating and he can certainly be intimidating, but really he's just a big softie.
 

[Crypty Scribbles 3,007]

Ooo. Looks nice. Even if out of MLP main concept.

Cutiemark is pretty difficult for my taste. It' would be annoying to draw it in small size.

And YAY! Almighty alicorn alchemist!

[Plume 922]

Guuuuhhh I love this <3333 I love your furry hooves and style, and his overall colour scheme is neato. I'd only maybe suggest changing the eyes to match the gems/cutie mark just for a more generally cohesive colour scheme, but he's pretty great as is.

[Mentis Soliloquy 3,024]

Oh I likey HV very nice design as normal where you come up for the design?  

[Howling Voice 77]

Guuuuhhh I love this <3333 I love your furry hooves and style, and his overall colour scheme is neato. I'd only maybe suggest changing the eyes to match the gems/cutie mark just for a more generally cohesive colour scheme, but he's pretty great as is.

 

Thanks! Though actually his eyes being a stark different color was on purpose, they're meant to be his most striking feature, the thing everyone notices first sort of thing =3

 

 

 

Oh I likey HV very nice design as normal where you come up for the design?  

 

From my brain? XD I've had the character for a while now, he was a humanoid before (and is in his main story arc, if I made this blog its an AU thing)

[Plume 922]

 

 

Though actually his eyes being a stark different color was on purpose, they're meant to be his most striking feature, the thing everyone notices first sort of thing =3

 

 

Ohhhh makes sense! Then you've definitely achieved it ^^

[Melted Dog 161]

 

Another character for my potential blog.

 

This guys name is Cray, he's an Alicorn representing change, his cutie mark is an oroboros, i wanted ot keep it pretty simple but his main talent is alchemy. (Before you ask, no it's not from FMA, but I do like that series!).

 

Cray's a large, bulky guy, he looks intimidatating and he can certainly be intimidating, but really he's just a big softie.

 

I agree. He looks huggable.

PS. When I thought of his name the first thing that came to my mind was 'b----es be cray'.