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I write fanfics. I would really like a few reviews on these projects:

 

Mass Effect, MLP crossover: COMPLETE: http://www.ponyficti...ory.php?sid=911

 

Romeo and Juliet with ponies: INCOMPLETE: http://www.ponyficti...ry.php?sid=1018

 

It Was Almost a Good Idea: COMPLETE: http://www.fimfictio...ost-a-good-idea...

 

Tabula Rasa (comes after It was almost a good idea): INCOMPLETE: http://www.fimfictio...504/Tabula-Rasa

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ok just to start of with, the mass effect one is a great story and i really like the way you naled the aspects and feel of the mass effect universe

i will get back to you with feedback on the other ones as soon i have read them

 

Romeo and juliet with ponies is good but i didn't really like it (a personal opinion)

 

it was almost a god idea, seems like a god and strong story with a god cast of characters that we already know. it is a story that seems like it is able to hold water. even though i only read the first chapter it still seems god


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ok just to start of with, the mass effect one is a great story and i really like the way you naled the aspects and feel of the mass effect universe

i will get back to you with feedback on the other ones as soon i have read them

 

Romeo and juliet with ponies is good but i didn't really like it (a personal opinion)

 

it was almost a god idea, seems like a god and strong story with a god cast of characters that we already know. it is a story that seems like it is able to hold water. even though i only read the first chapter it still seems god

 

Thanks, could you tell me what you don't like about the Romeo and juliet with ponies? I'd hate to write the whole story if it isn't good
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oh no no no, it's not that is not good i just don't like the tail of Romeo and juliet

 

Thanks, could you tell me what you don't like about the Romeo and juliet with ponies? I'd hate to write the whole story if it isn't good

 

i'm other people will like it

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oh no no no, it's not that is not good i just don't like the tail of Romeo and juliet

 

i'm other people will like it

 

...oh... :derp:
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