FanOfManyShows 396 June 11, 2016 Share June 11, 2016 (edited) I have a lot of OCs, each one feels 'finished' but I think that only with another person's help, I can see if they really are. Serenity Francis Zephyr Nectar Crystal Astral Star Misty Zealous Enigma Constructive criticism is appreciated. Edited July 22, 2016 by Frannis Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stardust* 3,302 June 11, 2016 Share June 11, 2016 They all have a good solid base, a really good outline. I feel like there just needs to be a bit of meat added to give it a bit more feeling. You want to know about each pony, not just where they grew up, how they got their cutie mark and where they ended up. I feel like once you add just a bit more detail to the backstory and even a bit more to the personality they will all be wonderful! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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