private Rejected RP

[Dawna Fawn 18]

Link to OOC Topic: http://mlpforums.com/topic/15711-rejected-rp/#entry343358

(first post :3 use the parentheses to say anything out of character and tell me if i do anything wrong D: i will appreciated it unless it spelling and grammar no grammar Nazis here use whatever kind of tense you are most comfortable with or just copy mine)

 

 

Dawna Fawn Sits wakes up to the darkness and dampness of an Ally. She yawns and Frowns as she stretches and stands up. "another loathsome day" she thinks to herself sighing deeply

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Shadow was Flying Across Ponyvile with tears in his eyes. ''YOUR STUPID!'' Screamed a Pony with a Cupcake on his head. ''I JUST WANTED TO HELP!'' Cried Shadow as Tears were Pacing Across his face. He ran into a Dark Alley to hide from the Ponies. He Put his hooves on his face and Started To Gently Cry. ''I just wanted to help...There all so mean.'' Said Shadow.

[Prince Midnight 817]

midnight frowned, things werent going the way they used too, ever since.....well, ever since, "the incident" that made him what he is, he just couldnt hold down anything, he couldnt focus on his job, he couldnt focus on anything.

having been fired once he chuckled darkly "guess things couldnt get any worse."

as he passed by and alley, he heard crying, "h-hello?"

[Dawna Fawn 18]

Hidden in the shadows Dawna scrunches up to the wall of the Ally "who is this to shead tears of woeful sadness, despair clouding his face and soul?" ​she thought "he only desires to be forgiven." her face softened in sympathy.

[Prince Midnight 817]

midnight frowned as he walked slowly into the alley, "is anyone here?"

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Shadow Looked up at Midnight. ''Your another one of them! GO AWAY!'' Screamed Shadow to midnight as Starting to Cry Again. ''WHY ARE YOU PONIES SO MEAN?! ALL I WANT TO DO IS HELP AND YOU TREAT ME LIKE DIRT!'' Cried Shadow as Beginning to Sob.

[Prince Midnight 817]

midnight trotted forward, "no, no,....p-please, dont cry." he tilted his head and sat down, "whats wrong?"

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Shadow Stopped Crying and looked at Midnight. ''I was helping Pinkie Pie make Cupcakes... Then She started Screaming at me when I did something wrong. Then I was giving a Cake to a friend when I tripped on a rock and it fell on his head. That's Why I usually Hang out here...Cause Its Quiet,No ponies go here, and No one can hear me Scream and Cry In pain...'' Said Shadow as Putting his head on the Cold Stone Floor. ''I'm a Disaster...My parents didn't want to have me so I lived in a Orphanage Until Age 17...'' Said Shadow as Starting to Cry again.

[Dawna Fawn 18]

Dawna blows her hair away from her eye so she can get a better look at him. "it breaks my broken heart to see a pony let rivers fall from their eyes as so." she thought sadly.

 

"i am nobody."she thought in sadness

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Shadow then Noticed Dawna Staring at him. Shadow Stopped Crying. ''Shes so...Beautiful'' Thought Shadow as Staring at Dawna. He began to Create Small Hearts in his eyes as Staring at Dawna with a Light Smile. ''Hello...'' Said Shadow as Blushing,Still Staring at Dawna.

[Dawna Fawn 18]

"ive been spotted!" she thought her expression was a mixture of surprise, relief, and fear.

 

she didnt know weather to run or stay put

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Shadow Noticed Dawna wanting to run. Shadow walked over to her. ''Don't Run...It's Fine. I know I startled you and I'm Sorry..But your just so... Uh..Ummm..Pretty.'' Said Shadow as Gasping at the Last Word he said and Shoved a Hoof into his Mouth. He took the Hoof out and Started Shaking.

[Dawna Fawn 18]

Dawna Blushed too "no one... no one has ever spoken to me before..." she said shiftily.

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''Uhh...I um...Sorta...Like..You'' Said Shadow to Dawna before Blushing and Giggling.

[Dawna Fawn 18]

Dawna sits down and smiles " i, haven't spoken to anyone in a while either..." she said almost silently.

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Shadow Smiled and then Shook her hoof. ''My name is Shadow.'' Said Shadow as Smiling at Dawna. He then noticed her mane Shining. ''Your Mane...It's Beautiful.'' Said Shadow as Staring at her Mane. ''It's..Like your an Angel.'' Said Shadow as Smiling and Blushing.

[Dawna Fawn 18]

"a shadowy angel of the Gutters." she said Blowing her mane out of her eye again.

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Shadow Frowned and Put his hoof On Dawna's Back. ''Don't say that...You look Beautiful..You look like the Angel from the Heavens...Not the Gutter.'' Said Shadow Once Again Smiling.

[Dawna Fawn 18]

Dawna smiled then started to cry of joy. "thank you..." she laughs she hugs him and cry's some more tears falling onto his back.

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Shadow Smiled and Patted her mane. ''Your amazing...Why would you need to thank me? I'm the one who should be thanking you for coming into my life.'' Said Shadow as Smiling and Squeezing Dawna.

Edited May 13, 2012 by Calirolls

[Dawna Fawn 18]

Suddenly Dawna remembered the other pony who was there. and opened her eyes wide to him. Something about him scared her, she didn't know what. she backed away slowly and blinked. then ran. she ran into the shadows tears of sadness replaced her tears of joy as she had to leave. she ran hidden and away.

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Shadow Stared At Dawna Running away. ''What? Did I do something wrong?'' Said Shadow to himself. He Sat Down and Put his hooves on his face.

[Dawna Fawn 18]

Dawna Cried as she regretted leaving so suddenly. she stopped in another Ally and sat down hoping to find some sort of Drama to get her mind off of the guilt eating at her chest.

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Shadow got up from the Alleyway and began to ask Ponies if they had Seen Dawna. Soon this lead to the Alleyway Dawna was at. ''Dawna?'' Said Shadow as looking in the Alleyway.

[Dawna Fawn 18]

Dawna heard the voice but stayed hidden. "what actions will he take to a pony who is not there?" she asked herself in silence. she knelt into the shadows and left no markers of her existence in that ally.