Applejack eating a Hershey's Chocolate bar

[Flutterdom 4]

This is my first time making a pony sketch of mine into a computer graphic, so I'd like some feedback

 

Sketch: http://i.imgur.com/71RMC.jpg

Graphic: http://i.imgur.com/yGreZ.png

[MVC NVMXD JVRXD 2,406]

A little tip: When tracing, don't follow the line so... closely. You can see that some parts of the line are "Wiggly" on her flank and stuff. Nice try, though!

[Love4discord18 269]

Yeah you should smooth out the lines more. But good none the less

[Dizzy Ditzy Doo! 1,120]

I'm actually sure that's not a tracing, I can't even draw a perfect line with one stroke of the pencil, This is pleasant though, I'm always big on hersheys chocolate.

[jdor11 91]

i think it has a lot of potential, but every pony is right the line has to be straiter, otherwise good work