I drew a pony

[Kevin Tang 2,426]

But this time, it's not just my OC 

It's been a long time since the last time I drew a unicorn

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I don't know what the problem is with this drawing, but I definitely know something's not right 

[Opal 6]

Do you need criticism?

[SharpWit 2,682]

6 hours ago, Kevin Tang said:

I don't know what the problem is with this drawing, but I definitely know something's not right 

My guess would be the Kirin horn. It appears to be too short and the stripe goes too high on it, making the split end look like it's off to the side and not facing forward. Otherwise not bad.

[Kevin Tang 2,426]

5 hours ago, Opal said:

Do you need criticism?

You can give me some critics if you want to 

[Opal 6]

I agree with the previous observation. I would also add, try to narrow the neck a bit, it is usually in the range of the center of the eyes. Although I draw ponies of the 2 months , I can say that with practice you will understand how to draw and everything will be very beautiful ( I drew a pony very bad at the beginning, but with practice everything has changed ).

Edited March 29, 2019 by Opal

[Kevin Tang 2,426]

5 hours ago, Opal said:

I agree with the previous observation. I would also add, try to narrow the neck a bit, it is usually in the range of the center of the eyes. Although I draw ponies of the 2 months , I can say that with practice you will understand how to draw and everything will be very beautiful ( I drew a pony very bad at the beginning, but with practice everything has changed ).

I did try to draw a pony from a horse base, and yeah... It wasn't a very clever idea. I am improving over time. When looking at my old 2018 drawings, I am pretty sure that improvement is present.