critique wanted Max Makes 3D Pone

[maximum124 7]

Hello, Im making an OC and need some help with the particulars from you fine folk

Im not too sure on the name, which at the moment is Shifting Sands, as well as the cutiemark which can be changed pretty easily

Im not really sure what the cactus represents, or her overall place in the universe (im still only on season 2) And her anthro form needs some clothes.

Same render but with a hoodie

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Ah I don't know how to add topic tags so Ill just make it clear I want critique please!

Edited June 21, 2019 by maximum124
more in line with orignal reason for thread creation

[Windy Breeze 15,190]

On 6/18/2019 at 7:47 AM, maximum124 said:

Hello, Im making an OC and need some help with the particulars from you fine folk

Im not too sure on the name, which at the moment is Shifting Sands, as well as the cutiemark which can be changed pretty easily

Im not really sure what the cactus represents, or her overall place in the universe (im still only on season 2) And her anthro form needs some clothes.

Same render but with a hoodie

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Ah I don't know how to add topic tags so Ill just make it clear I want critique please!

How about name her as Sandy Shifts or Sandy Shift.

[maximum124 7]

7 hours ago, Writer Rhyme said:

How about name her as Sandy Shifts or Sandy Shift.

Sandy Shift does sound more in line with the established names!

[Windy Breeze 15,190]

32 minutes ago, maximum124 said:

Sandy Shift does sound more in line with the established names!

Oh, I'm glad to hear that.

[maximum124 7]

Ive updated her head texture a bit and animated a walk cycle

(wings im still trying to skin right)