critique wanted Need some critiquing and pre-reading for my G4 post-series fanfic.

[ShadowDurza 16]

Soon after finishing the series, I started a post-series fanfic taking place between The Ending of The End and the flashback in The Last Problem. The main premise is that the Mane 6 journey to vast underground cavern called The Heart of the World in an attempt to retrieve the ones their ancestors formed the world's first friendship with, the humans, who left on account of a long-forgotten friendship problem between them. Beyond that, it's more action and combat-focused than the source material.

So far, I've got a one-page prologue, a short Chapter 0 and five chapters ranging from 12 to 14 pages each. I intend to publish it as a once a month serialization once I receive more critiques. The link to the Google Doc will be sent as a PM upon request, and please feel free to ask questions here.