DJ-Pon 3 Portrait (Require critique please)

[~Lawful Jordo~ 2,066]

Alright, in my personal opinion, this is one of my better pieces of work. It took me 4 hours in photoshop, I was just fooling around Tell me what you guys think

 

http://eljordo911.de...Pon-3-307413717

 

Edited June 10, 2012 by Eljordo

[Guest]

Bro. You made ALL of that in four hours?

 

Show us more of your work, please! XD

Feckin' sick, man! :3

[Storm Spark 115]

If only my OC could look that cool!

 

Alright, in my personal opinion, this is one of my better pieces of work. It took me 4 hours in photoshop, I was just fooling around Tell me what you guys think

 

http://eljordo911.de...Pon-3-307413717

 

 

[VladmireV.S.(Crank) 1,096]

OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!I....I-I JUST...............i need to go change my pants.

[Proailurus 214]

Holy crap that's freakin awesome!

[DERPYHOOV3S 3]

Amazing, keep it up.

[Lostwanderer 367]

My jaw dropped

[~Lawful Jordo~ 2,066]

Wow, I wasn't expecting so much feedback so quickly 0.o

 

Thanks for the support guys

[mrmcsavage 34]

THIS IS SO AMAZING!! I wouldn't change much, but since you want a critique, I might suggest editing the jaw a little bit to be slimmer maybe? I don't know but its AWESOME!

[Victoria and Co. 782]

*sees DJ Pon-3 picture*

*disregards breathing, acquires Vinyl*

[~Chaos~ 3,967]

That's one amazing piece of art! great job

[Swit Swat 536]

Whoa! Awesome dude!

[Nah 3,182]

Wow that is amazing!

[Dusty Soul 2,611]

THis is truly amazing

Edited June 12, 2012 by dusty soul

[~Lawful Jordo~ 2,066]

THis is truly amazing

 

Well thank you

[Crombie 32]

I like the concept and the colors.

 

Critique: The form in this is very confusing. The pose is interesting. There's no determined light source, which is very confusing. Her hair's a little bulgy and not spikey(?). There is some feel of volume but it feels a little muddled by the inconsistent light source.

 

All and all I still like it, kind of reminds me of the early Star Fox concept artwork.