critique wanted Nightmare Shiny's First Story

[GodlyWolf 1,678]

 

1 minute ago, Hadrien said:

Werewolves, Dogmen, Timberwolves. Whatever those things were, they were really intent on getting food that night. I wonder if they would have come back the next day if the family stayed there. Maybe they weren't werewolves and would've have come back even on a not Full Moon like tonight......Food for Werewolf thoughts I guess

Scroll up and you will see werewolves was the answer to the first clue lol

[Hadrien 937]

Moments ago, Gusty The Brave said:

 

Scroll up and you will see werewolves was the answer to the first clue lol

Yeah, but that's too easy. I'm trying to see beyond the clues, to another possible reality where I'm right and you're wrong

[GodlyWolf 1,678]

Moments ago, Hadrien said:

Yeah, but that's too easy. I'm trying to see beyond the clues, to another possible reality where I'm right and you're wrong

Hahaha thats fair

[Shiny Silvermoon 3,008]

10 minutes ago, Gusty The Brave said:

 

Scroll up and you will see werewolves was the answer to the first clue lol

I actually used werewolves but I don't think those were humans during the day! However, they look like werewolves so... 

Edited October 29, 2023 by Shiny Silvermoon

[GodlyWolf 1,678]

2 minutes ago, Shiny Silvermoon said:

I actually used werewolves but I don't think those were humans during the day! However, they look like werewolves so... 

Yeah I gathered that while listening to both stories lol

 

Hadrien read everypony not everybody if I heard correctly 

[Hadrien 937]

53 minutes ago, Gusty The Brave said:

Yeah I gathered that while listening to both stories lol

 

Hadrien read everypony not everybody if I heard correctly 

That's what was written ! 

[Evil Pink One 13,018]

Im telling you its real estate agents!

[Ice Princess Silky 10,827]

20 hours ago, StrawberryMilk Simp said:

Im telling you its real estate agents!

STOP BLAMING US!!!! 

[Shiny Silvermoon 3,008]

1 hour ago, Planeswalker Silky said:

STOP BLAMING US!!!! 

You are a real estate agent, @Planeswalker Silky?! It's okay, I still love you...