my oc is pretty cool I

[orangejuice 65]

 

 

this is okay right? How do I put the pig amoji? 

 

 

Edited May 24, 2022 by orangejuice

[FortyShadows 217]

I only watched a few episodes of PPG (several years ago) but I'd say it looks good. Can't judge proportions on that one!

Now for the pony OC! There are a few proportion problems but it looks fine. I like the expression!

Well, keep drawin! ^w^

[Titan Rising 2,156]

lol that looks pretty awesome

[MVC NVMXD JVRXD 2,406]

Your PPG is pretty good. But with your oc.... The eye to the right looks significantly smaller than the other one. You might wanna make sure they're the same size next time;) The back legs have a couple things wrong with them. They are too short and thin. You should make sure that they are thicker than the front legs next time. And your wing looks very sloppy, you should study how the show does it a bit more.

Overall, though, not that bad

[Hazardus_Havard. 479]

You're right, the image should probably be in Other Fan Work, but I'm not here to nitpick at that, just putting down on some Constructive Criticism.

 

The PPG is pretty straight forward and is accurate to the style, I'd suggest making the hair a bit higher though and out a tad bit more to the left of the image. It actually looks like you took a PPG image and added work on top of it. If so, I'd advice to try and do original work to get better overall on your art skills. If not, try doing poses that you don't usually see from related images to really stand out from others.

 

As for the Pony you only have two major concerns here. The nose needs to have a swoop out and then curve back in to the head. The eye on the right of the image (left eye anatomically) should be drawn like a circle eye, and after that's done draw the eyelid marker on top of the eye and erase the rest to make it look better.

[orangejuice 65]

On 2012-06-30 at 9:09 AM, 'Hazardus_Havard' said:

You're right, the image should probably be in Other Fan Work, but I'm not here to nitpick at that, just putting down on some Constructive Criticism.

 

The PPG is pretty straight forward and is accurate to the style, I'd suggest making the hair a bit higher though and out a tad bit more to the left of the image. It actually looks like you took a PPG image and added work on top of it. If so, I'd advice to try and do original work to get better overall on your art skills. If not, try doing poses that you don't usually see from related images to really stand out from others.

 

As for the Pony you only have two major concerns here. The nose needs to have a swoop out and then curve back in to the head. The eye on the right of the image (left eye anatomically) should be drawn like a circle eye, and after that's done draw the eyelid marker on top of the eye and erase the rest to make it look better.

 

no refference used acually the show stole my art and used it as a refference its kind of crazy sometimes I think

Edited May 24, 2022 by orangejuice

[Hazardus_Havard. 479]

yes I did use a reference for the PPG picture I figured I could because it is just a one time thing and I was curious on how it would look. Anyways thanks for the comment and criticism I really appreciate it.

 

NP, your avatar you're using is actually very well done, try doing your hair like that (like how the blue area is not hard-lined)

[FedoraMemes 582]

That's pretty awesome! I love how the hair fits perfectly onto his/her head.