They Walk Among Us

[TheHouseholdWarrior 12]

Hey, guys!

I'm relatively new to the fanfiction community, and I really feel like I need to share this out loud with y'all, if you don't mind...

http://www.fimfictio...y-Walk-Among-Us

It's my very first fanfic. Ever. Actually, it's more like my very first story that's more than 2000 words...

So... I really need as much feedback as I can get. I know it's long (really long), but please read the first two chapters so I know how I can improve myself. Thanks a bunch!

[Twilight Sky 449]

Very good but only read the prologue....keep it up (|(^.^)|)