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Striksette

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Ugh, too much black outlining for me. It just looks way too thick for that much black. Try darker shades of the color it's touching, think it might help the image out. It feels really squiggly too; MS Paint I presume?

 

Other than that, I don't see too much wrong here. The proportions are accurate and it's presented, while blandly with the greyed backdrop, fairly well while presenting us with a nice gesture.


Practice makes perfect; but if nobody's perfect, why practice?


http://hazardus-havard.deviantart.com/

 

Art

 

http://www.fimfiction.net/story/70801/an-alien-walks-amongst-us

 

Story

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