Vido 37 July 20, 2012 Share July 20, 2012 I know that the body is too long and the cutie mark isn't the best. Will be coloring once I get me some colored pencils :3 Any criticism is appreciated! 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chigens and Kay 3,832 July 20, 2012 Share July 20, 2012 I know that the body is too long and the cutie mark isn't the best. Well, to be blunt, her wings are really fat too. My signature broke Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vido 37 July 20, 2012 Author Share July 20, 2012 Well, to be blunt, her wings are really fat too. Yea =/ I didn't notice that until now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MachineGunLola 408 July 20, 2012 Share July 20, 2012 Her wings are a bit too thick, as is the front of her body.. BANG! BANG! BANG! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rainbow Dash Loyalty 1,275 July 20, 2012 Share July 20, 2012 Lol, I drew the same thing last month xD I like it, but I think you put too many lines on the tail xP ~Signature created by Chaotic Discord~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BuggleLugs 53 July 20, 2012 Share July 20, 2012 (edited) solid effort, a little retouching and it will look nice Edited July 20, 2012 by BuggleLugs Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silver Stream 21 July 20, 2012 Share July 20, 2012 It's not bad, but I have a few critiques. Her head is kind of square, and her belly is a straight line. Her tail has too many lines, and her wings are too wide. Her legs are a little short, and her ear is too small. Her mane and tail both look a little jagged. On the bright side, I love her eye and bangs Keep practicing and you'll get better 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vido 37 July 21, 2012 Author Share July 21, 2012 Thank you all for the critiques, I may attempt this again tonight and post it sometime tomorrow. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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