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''Okay. Now answer my question, Surge. Where are the hot mares!'' Linus said while pointing a hoof in the air. ''I demand mares if I live in hell!'' Linus said. Pure. Winning. I know, right?

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Fine. Until you learn your lesson i will give you your mares. But remember this is your hell. So they will be mares of the finest caliber. But just remember where you are and what you can and can not do.

Poofs some mares out of the clouds. Their bodies were amazing. Their plots were awesome. But all of their faces were very odd.

Here you go the mares you asked for. Hahahaha. I hope you like the one who birthed you as much as you lust for other mares.

Hahahahahahahahahahahaha.

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''BUUUUUUUUUUUUUU!'' Linus yelled. He had a light bulb over his head, literally. ''Okay.. Let's do this!'' Linus said while grabbing a lollipop out of the ground. He stuck it onto one of the mares faces. ''Wow.. That makes it so much better!'' Linus said while grinning. There bodies were amazing, and now there faces are made of candy! ''Hell yeah!'' Linus said while using a air guitar. He stuck lollipops onto the others faces. ''Well, Now I have to lead them to my body. Does this mean hugging?'' Linus said. He rolled his eyes and hugged one of them. ''If I had wings.. They would be sticking up.'' Linus whispered.

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I wouldn't do that if i were you......But then again im not you. Im not the one stuck in this candy land of a world. I still find it odd that you could buck your own mother just by putting candy over her face. Oh and one more thing. Before you go putting things in places just remember what happened to your hoof. Oh and another thing. Everything in hell has teeth. And i mean everything. Oh and another thing i hope it feels good

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''Go the hump a tree, Surge!'' Linus yelled. ''Okay.. Where were we?'' Linus said while cocking an eyebrow. ''Hot mares with lollipops glued to their face, Candy Mountains, and creepy images?'' Linus said. Wow.. Yeah.

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While Linus was busy entertaining himself, one of the larger mares began to giggle in an unsettling tone. She had a scruffy, light brown coat, and a blood red tail with a lighter red streak running through it. Plus what looked like a pencil for a cutie mark, but in this situation, it could easily be any other phallic shaped object

 

She began talking in an almost artificial tone

Oh Linny, isn't there any love for me?


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Linus shrugged. ''Sure.. I guess.'' Linus said while rolling his eyes. ''And why do you laugh like my old teammate?'' Linus said while cocking an eyebrow. Eh.. I don't trust her. Don't worry! This is hell, It's harmless! I mean, your cool with a younger version of my mom! Don't say that. Why? It makes me shudder. How can you even shudder? Your a thought. Logic is no longer in this world of shit.

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Bumble stumbled around the strange land she had woken in. Her head throbbed ferociously, but she never remembered anything happening to her. She finally came upon a few ponies, not being able to count with her head setting off another jet of pain every few seconds. "Uh, do you ponies have any clue what this place is?" She then realized her mistake. She didn't know who was bad or good in this place, and these ponies could just as easily capture her and take her to somewhere in this devilish place.

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Just 15 feet away from the ponies suddenly appeared an unconscious mare. It seems that she had died as well, but was knocked out cold. "I am asleep? I was just walking down the streets of Canterlot and there was a flash of light. Did I fall asleep on the street?" Octavinyl thought to herself in her dream as she stayed unconscious.


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''Welcome to hell.'' Linus said while looking at Bumble. He trotted over to the Pony sleeping and kicked her. ''Hey, Wake up!'' Linus yelled. ''Your in hell!'' Linus said.

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Bumble raised an eyebrow, but her expression changed to an expression of pain, another jolt from her headache coming through. "Interesting how you keep using the term hell. It really doesn't all seem that bad," she said, looking around.


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''Trust me, it is. Soon you'll be having thoughts of awkward war battles and a voice stuck in your head.'' Linus said while rolling his eyes. Hey! I didn't mean you.. I meant Surge! Oh.. Well, Um... Okay. Okay indeed?

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Octavinyl still laid unconscious on the ground unaware of the ponies that were there with her. "When am I gonna wake up already?! I mean I don't wanna be seen sleeping on the streets of Canterlot!" Octavinyl thought to herself in her dream.


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No Linus this is your hell, not theirs. They are stuck in a place where they must find the truth of why the died. They have to let go of their natural body and except their death. You on the other hoof are stuck here till i see fit.

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''OH COME ON! WAKE UP!'' Linus yelled while picking up Octavinyl. ''Okay.. I'll carry the sleeping mare. I guess.'' Linus said while rolling his eyes. ''As soon as this is all over I'm going to drown in the chocolate river.'' Linus said.

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Dont touch her she might catch your hell. But the reason shes still sleep its because she has not fully died yet. And from the looks of things shes not going back down there. She'll wake up in a sec. Well look on the bright side. Now you have somepony to talk to other than yourself.

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The mare place one if her front hoof's onto Linus's shoulder blade, gently caressing it

My voice sounds familiar to you? That's strange...

She said in a slightly lower tone than tone than she had before

 

Trying to remove the lollipop from her face, she attempted to be evermore seductive

Now c'mon, big boy


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This is getting strange. I told you so! Shut up. Okay. Linus began to sweat. ''Heh..'' Linus said while blushing. ''Maybe we can do this later?'' Linus said while making a terrible poker face. Your screwed! No kidding.. This is just horrifying! She's freaking me out. This is just getting stranger. Do you think this is a male in disguise? No way! Hell wouldn't be that cruel.. Right?
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Octavinyl woke up from her long slumber and opened up her beautiful red eyes. "Where am I?" She asked as she looked around. She then noticed Linus carrying her, "Who are you? Where are we?" she asked as she kept looking around.


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''Were in lollipop land.'' Linus whispered. ''Nah.. It's actually hell. Well, in my opinion. Were all stuck here until further notice. So I consider you get comfortable.'' Linus said.

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"Wait. Am I dead?!" She asked with a shocking looked on her face. She then remembered that she was killed by an Lunarian pegasai bombardment. "I can't believe my life ended right there..." She said as she started crying.


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''It's okay.. We all die. Apparently others don't.'' Linus said while rolling his eyes. ''It's okay.. I was killed by a swarm of you know what. So were not very different.'' Linus said.

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The mare began to drift off from her seductive act, and let loose a monotone voice, clearly not that of a female

Young ma'am, you may of been killed, but here is where you continue your life; in the afterlife. This seems like a suitable heaven for you, so all you can do for now is enjoy the positives of your death

 

She then simply stroked her coat, in an awkward attempt to comfort her


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She sat down facing down still feeling upset that her innocent life had ended. "I was a musician at the Canterlot Royal Symphony, how could my life end so early? I'm only 20 and now my life is over..."


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"It's not about how smart you are, but how thick your heart is." - Cherry Blossom.

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''Uh.. Are you okay?'' Linus said while looking at the mare. ''You seem a little sad.'' Linus said. Uh oh.. This is the part where everything goes wrong! Really? Nah. I just like saying that.

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