writing You

[Pan the Fabulous Ferret 2,642]

So, another poem by me? well this one is different. I wrote it roughly six months ago, and I wrote it FOR someone. She had seen it but I never told her it was for her.

 

And also, this is about as sappy a poem as I will ever make.

 

You

are a being of sensual compassion.

This feeling to which you give me in utmost grace,

breathes new life into one that was old.

This feeling.

It leaves a void,

fillable only when you stand by my side.

I am a shallow vessel,

brought to feeling,

because of you.

Thoughts? comments? unnescesary spam?

tell me what you think!

[Apple-Jack 312]

Howdy

it seems good to me and even if it wont be good the gesture counts so she would be happy to listen or read ur poem

Congratz !!!

[Senor Citizen 516]

Wut.

Look, I like you, but I don't like you like... THAT. So it won't work. Sorry.

LOLOLOL

Still didn't fulfill the char limit.