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The group sat there for a moment

"Oh the others, i almost forgot." stated pinkie "well let's go see the rest of the gang

The two of them got up and left twilight.

"Thanks Twilight!" pinkie shouted after they had already gone down the street.

They continued on their way out of the town until they got onto a dirt road. A large apple orchard could be seen.

"almost there!" pinkie said, trying to retain her excitement.


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Hank nods waving bye as he followed pinkie he glances at her cutie mark "you like throwing parties?" He smiles walking "havent had a party in years." He kept walking seeing the apple orchard "i have alot of friends with me now. They are just like me, maybe at a party with your friends i can have them meet you. Infact they already have." He smiles after all the AIs can read his mind.


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confused by the friends thing pinkie just shrugged it off. They walked up another dirt road that led up to a large red barn.

"they are in here." pinkie said as she pushed open the door

"apple jack... It's pinkie, i have someone you should meet."

An orange pony walked around the corner

"ah, so he's the stranger y'all been talkin' about?" apple jack said, studying the new figure.

"well howdy! it's a pleasure to be meetin' ya' "

 

"so pinkie what brings you here?" apple jack asked

"well funny you should ask" pinkie replied "first i was giving him a tour of the town, and now we are looking for a place for him to stay when it's night."

"oh... well i reckon you could bunk here tonight if ya' need to"

"what do you say hank? we finish up the tour and you come back here?"


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Hank watches apple jack smiling at her reaction, after all thats probably the most normal reaction he saw "its nice to meet you too." He gave a bow. "Sure ill come back here after the tour." He gave a smile "thank you Apple Jack and thank you Pinkie for everything." He hugs them both. "So who will be next?"


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"We are going to go see my friend fluttershy" said pinkie "okey dokey?"

They went out of the barn and made there way back into town to go meet fluttershy

they climbed up an easy, winding path and made there way to a home that out lied the town.

"Here we are hank" said pinkie.

*knock knock


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Hank smiles as Delta appears "hank i detect a portal opening up near twilights house. Get their fast." He lookd at pinkie "this will have to wait."

 

Soon enough outside twilights house a portal happens to open up and 5 humans walk out, each with a gun. They look around as one yells "Hank where are you!"

 

Hank grabs his hatchet and kills one and soon 3 of them surround hank as they do hand to hand combat. Hank is winning not getting hit as he delt the most damage to them and soon kills them. The last human pointed his gun at hank and thought for a second and points his gun inside twilights house at twilight. He soon fires as Hank shot him and quickly appears infront of twilight taking the bullet to the chest and fell on the ground coughing out blood as he started to remove the bullet and soon passes out.


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Pinkie and Twilight looked on at the seen in horror.

As Hank passes out, Pinkie runs to twilight.

"We need to get him medical attention!" shouted pinkie "Where is Rainbow Dash When you need her?"

"i don't know pinkie, but I'm going to try and keep the wound closed, you run and get the doctor!"

"Okey dokey lokey!" replied pinkie as she sprinted down the street.

Twilight goes over to hank and begins to add pressure to the wound


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Hank sat feeling the pressure "is somepony getting the doctor." He coughs out blood and sighs " hope we can get a doctor..." He helped keep pressure also "can you use magic to teleport me to the doctors? Who did i save?" He thinks for a moment "i hope they are happy." He passes out again.


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"I would teleport you but i'm afraid that the teleportation would be to violent for your body in its current state." twilight replied "but here comes pinkie and the doctor"

Hank passes out.

"Twilight i brought the medic, help us load him onto the cart." pinkie said

They scurry to get hank onto the cart while keeping pressure on the wound.

"Don't die on us" twilight said to hank as the cart dashed to the hospital.

 

Now Pinkie and Twilight wait outside the medical ward waiting to hear how the operation went. Rainbow Dash and Apple Jack come through the door and joint them.


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The doctor walks out of the room and sighs cleaning up "hey you guys did the right thing saving this human like that it was really nice. He is fine so you dont have to worry. I am wondering who did he save? and you are all allowed to see him." He shows the room hank is in.

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Hank laid on the bed with bandages around his chest has he had his hood off. He relaxes glad he saved them.


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Twilight and Pinkie enter the room first, Rainbow Dash and apple jack follow them in.

Twilight walks to the bedside and says "thanks for saving me back there..."

"what was that all about back there hank?" rainbow dash asked "those guys came from out of nowhere and they really wanted you dead.


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Hank smiles at them all as they walk in "you are so welcome Twilight i dont want to lose a new friend. " he looks at rainbow dash "they want me dead because we are enemies. They want out group dead and i have what they want." He shows a chromed chip with 8 lights showing the AIs built in it "it has all the memories and abilities of my team, if the enemy gets it we are dead and earth wont be good anymore. This chip keeps me alive." He puts it back in his cloak and hugs them "im not in the condition to move right now so can you showme the rest of your friends?"


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Rainbow Dash says "I'm on it!" as she zips out the door.

"I guess you can stay over when you've recovered" said apple jack

Rainbow Dash flew back into the room. Some papers float into the door behind her

"They will be here in a few minutes" she said

"wow! dash, that was super duper fast" pinkie exclaimed.


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Hank smiles "that was fast." He had his 8 AIs appear as they smile "hello." The alpha says

Soon enough the seven says "hello guys."

 

Hank smiles "meet my AIs the one that my enemies need. The AI units are called Alpha which is the main one and is just like Hank, he is a light blue hologram. There is delta which is intellegence and he is green hologram, epsilon which is memory and he is a blue hologram, theata which is fun and she is a purple hologram, there is also sigma which is rage and he is a red hologram with flames representing rage, there is Iota which is honesty and he is gold. there is charlie who glows white and she represents medic which is how hank is able to heal fast. there is zeta who is yellow and she repreaents bravery."

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"that's why they call me Rainbow Dash" Rainbow Dash said smugly...

The ponies ooh'd and ah'd at the AI holograms...

"This is more advanced than anything we have here in equestria" said twilight, "i've never seen anything like this before."

Hank smiled

 

two more ponies enter the room

"There you are Fluttershy and Rarity!" pinkie shouted


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The AIs smiled at them "its really nice to meet you." They each walked up to one but Alpha and Sigma stayed behind. Hank gave a smile "the AIs are family."

The AIs examine them slowly smiling. Delta was with twilight "i saw all the books you seem smart."

Theata smiles at Pinkie "you seem to have alot of fun like me." She rode on a skateboard infront of pinkie.

Epsilon appears next to Rainbow Dash "you sure are fast. Hank is pretty fast also. Maybe we can see your flying in action one day? Is there a competition coming up about flying?"

Beta stands next to Apple Jack "thank you for having hank stay at your place he will be fine in a couple of hours."

Charlie smiles at Rarity "you look nice."

Zeta looks at Fluttershy "hello."

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Each of the six ponies busily chatted with the AI's. Each of the Ai's was just like the pony that they spoke with.

"hey twilight remember those elements of harmony?" said apple jack. "is this like deja vu or what?"

" oh yeah, that is right, yes they remind me greatly of those." replied twilight.

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Hank sat up "what are the elements of harmony?" He watches them all talk "is it something special about this place? Like how my AIs are special for my place?" He thinks seeing the resemblence to them. "Well i am starting to feel better and it looks like its getting dark."


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The AI's return to the Alpha.

"ah yes the elements of harmony..." twilight started, "we used them twice to help defeat a strong foe. And each element reflected our individual strengths."

"Ah yes..." apple jack said "are you feeling well enough to come over and rest?"


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Hank smiles "thats good. These AI's give us special abilities but the catch is that it takes our emotions away. Also it uses my energy to use the abilities so i can only do a certain amount everyday." He got up from the bed, "yes i am fine enough to go to your place and stay." he got up and walks around a bit. "let's go Apple Jack, maybe i can tell more stories about Earth."


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"alright partner, follow me" apple jack said as they left the room

 

"isn't that hank such a nice guy" pinkie said

"uh...yes" flutter shy responded

"Well what are we sitting around here for?" rainbow dash blurted out.

"you're right..." twilight said "we should all head home and try to get some rest after todays events.

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Hank nods following her "you all are so nice to me, i really enjoy it" he smiles as he hums a song "you know it is really hard to find some one this nice to me back at Earth, everyone is all mean." he thinks "so where will i be staying in?" He looks around as his hood his off and if the ponies look closely when he is in the light, he can see the scar over his left eye and no pupil.

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"ya'll are staying in the barn...Nah i'm just buckin' with ya' hank, we have a guest room in the house that's got your name on it." apple jack joked.

They continued until they hit the dirt road out of town

"so hank... what made earth the way it is anyway?" apple jack asked eagerly.

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He smiles "thats really nice of of you, letting me stay in your house do i owe you anything?" he smiles following still. "so Earth used to be a nice place, but at one point a group of people my team calls, the resistance. Formed and we tried to stop them but we have to get certain things from them, one of which is to help create the AIs." he gave a sigh "what other things do you want to know about Earth." he walks still not seeing a hole in the road because of his left eye. He fell forward but soon makes it into a roll and recovered getting up on his feet and walking still like it didnt happen. But though he got a pain in his chest from the wound as he holds the wound.

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"you don't owe me nothin'" she said.

 

"oh i see that's not good" apple jack replied "so why did they form a resistence?"

they keep walking

"lactually i'd like to know, look!....out..." apple jack said as hank trips and recovers.

"you alright there partner? you don't look so good." apple jack said in a worried tone.


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