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Hank smiles "im fine don't worry." he thinks for a moment. "well they formed the resistance because they didnt like the leader, which is the leader of my team. Both leaders hated each other because how my leader treated him. So right now the resistance is winning." he sighs "are we there yet i am getting tired.." he yawns.

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"i see" she said "yes we are almost there, i imagine you must be plum tuckered out after taking that wound earlier."

They walk up the hill and come to the apple family's house..

apple jack opens the door and gestures hank inside.

"follow me upstairs and i'll show you the guest room... and if you run into a little filly her name is apple bloom, the big one is my brother big Macintosh, and granny smith is already asleep so don't worry about her."

They make there way to the guest room

"well here you are, you rest up now fella'"

she left hank to his room.

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Hank smiles nodding remembering the names "Apple Jack, tomorrow ill tell you about my family ok?" he laid on his bed and smiles as he removed his cloak setting it on the chair and smiles as he closes his eyes and falls asleep. Once the sun came out, Hank still slept as he was recovering. It was rare for Hank to get a good sleep because if the AIs don't sleep than Hank can't sleep.

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As Apple Jack was down in the kitchen preparing breakfast for the gang a thought occurred to her... "What does hank eat?"

She continued making some hay bacon strips and some toast.

"i better go ask hank what he eats..." she thought as she left for the guest room

Apple Jack lightly knocks on the door to see if Hank is asleep

No response...

"well i'll come back in a few minutes" she thought as she left to attend the food once more.

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Once the knock happened the AIs woke up and they started to talk in Hank's head waking him up. Hank yawned as he left his cloak there and opens the door and heads to Apple Jack smiling "good morning" he had his bandages still on and it showed some of his scars as most of it is hidden from the bandages and the shirt, and it showed some muscle hank has and he has a 6 pack, he also has a scar in his throat from one of the missions he did as he got shot in the throat, he also has a scar on the side of his head showing why he has to have Epsilon to hold his memories. "Apple jack the reason why i cant see out of my left eye is from when I got bashed on the side and slowly got up as a grenade rolled next to me and the shrapnel explosion sliced my left eye which shows this scar and the no pupil."

 

Even with the lack of muscles compared to what Apple Jack expects Hank is a lot stronger than what he looks like because of the AIs abilities. "oh i bet you are wondering what i like to eat." he thinks "nothing that is oats, hay. I eat fruits such as apples, also toast and others. I dont really like eating meat so you don't have to worry about anything."

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"alright partner, i'll get you some apples and cherries to go with your toast then" apple jack said as she departed.

In the kitchen she is joined by apple bloom

"howdy big sis'" she said as she greeted apple jack, "whose the fella upstairs?"

"that's hank applebloom" apple jack replied "he's our guest for a while."

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Hank went downstairs again to the kitchen seeing Applebloom "hey you must be Applebloom.. its really nice to meet you" he smiles as he didnt have his cloak on as they could see some of his scars but the main thing was with his left eye. "Is breakfast done Apple jack?" he thought to himself to get his cloak on "should i put on my cloak? Or do you thing your brother and your granny wont mind."


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"almost done hank" apple jack replied

"howdy mister hank" apple bloom replied "what happened to your eye?"

"apple bloom! you don't need to ask that..." apple jack scolded

"don't mind 'em hank, they won't care, just do whatever is comfortable while you stay." apple jack replied to hank


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Hank gave a nod "Thank you so much for how you are treating me." He looks at apple bloom than Apple Jack "no its ok i dont mind telling her." he thinks "ok so my eye used to be working like you and Apple jacks but after an incident in protecting a team member, an explosion happened and it was right next to me. Pieces flew everywhere but some got me at my eye and under which shows about the scar and how i can't see from this eye." He looks at Apple Jack "ok well it feels alot better without my cloak on it helps the wound heal without it on."

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"no problem partner" apple jack replied

"wow that is so cool" apple bloom said in awe as she then ran out of the room as quickly as she entered

"fillies now adays just don't have the attention span to keep up decent conversation" apple jack said with a chuckle "yeah i bet it feels much better casual."

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Hank sighs "i dont recall telling you this but i had a sister before." he looks at the ground "well it does feel better than casual." he smiles "so is there a flying competition today? i saw fliers everywhere about it." He smiles as he waits. "Apple Jack you dont mind me staying here?"


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"what was she like?" applejack asked "and yes there is a flying competition in clouds dale today. Rainbow Dash will be there but since we aren't pegasi we can't really watch it i'm afraid... well we did go once, but i don't know if we will go through the effort again..." she said with a sigh

 

"not in the slightest hank, what makes you ask?"

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Hank thinks "well she did work with me, she is nice and loving, abit younger than me." he sighs "well who knows maybe you will be going i would probably see it thanks to my AIs." he thinks "oh i thought that i was going to be a problem staying here." he sighs "well Apple Jack is it done? i haven't ate anything for about 1 week."


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"ah, and where is she now?" applejack asked "and if you want to go there, maybe we could talk to twilight and she could help us get up there."

"no there is no problem staying here whatsoever." apple jack answered "and yes i just finished, here it is get it while it's fresh."

She rang a dinner triangle and hooped and hollered

The rest of the Apple's joined them in the dining room as they ate breakfast.

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Hank sighs "my sister died, or so that is what i was told." he thinks for a moment "well i could have sent my AI up there." he smiles "whatever they see i can see."

Once they went to the dining room to eat breakfast. Theta comes up "hey Hank look what i can do." she says as she made holographic fireworks appear, it even looks real.


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"i'm sorry to hear that." she replied "well it could be good to cheer on the contestants for better morale"

As they sit and eat hank's ai displays some fireworks

everyone stops eating and stares at the magnificent display and realism.

"man, earth must have been something in the technology department" stated applejack

"yeah" applebloom said as she stared at the show in front of her

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Hank nods "dont worry about it." He also stopped eating "wow theta thats amazing."

Theta smiles "it was hard to do, sorry for interrupting."

Hank smiles "its ok. Oh yea Earth is something with technology." He finishes his food as Delta appears "hank incoming call from the director."

Soon enough a screen pops up as it had the director standing "hank we need you, the resistance has the second portal maker and a bomb. We need you here to help get the bomb." Hank salutes nodding as he ran and got his cloak. He smiles "ill be there for the competition, apple jack."

Soon enough a portal opens and on the other side had the director and his team mates. "Maybe you all can meet my team mates but not now. Also go head to the contest with the others." He smiles

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"that hank sure knows how to make a scene" apple bloom said as the portal closed.

 

 

"hey twi' " apple jack said "you think we will be going to the flight competition?"

"well i'm busy today, but you guys can take the balloon if you'd like" twilight responded

"alright, i'll go get the others" apple jack replied as she left twilight to her studies

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As Thomas did his drills outside the alarm went off

"All personnel please report to the command center, this is not a drill... All personnel please report to the command center, this is not a drill.."

Thomas had no clue as to what was happening, he got into formation with the rest of everyone else and marched to the command center. When he arrived with the rest of the entire base they were greeted with urgent requests and commands from the officials on duty.

"We have an emergency..."

"We need these units to report..."

Details were vague but instructions were plentiful.

He fell in with his unit of 5 special operations trained team, they set out to the teleport receiving node right away.

The rest of the units went to another unseen emergency.

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Hank smiles at his team mates as they each had armor on (from halo). Soon enough his AIs went to the person they need to go to as the director sighs "Hank you need to put on your armor."

Hank nods as he puts on his armor. None of their armor looks alike, they each have different colors.

There names were based off states except for Hank, Hank was number one on the leader boards, second is Texas with black armor, than Carolina with light blue, the top three. The rest of the crew, South Dakota and North Dakota are twins, they both have purple but South is lighter, next is maine who has white armor, than wyoming who also has white armor, there is the pilot of the ship named Four Seven Niner, There is also Washington who is grey and yellow armor, CT who is brown armor, there is also Utah with blue armor. York has orange armor.

Once Hank had his armor on they set out to a building which has the bomb in it. Two drop ships sent out, One with the pilot, Hank, York, Maine, and Washington. On the second ship is Texas, Carolina, North, and Utah is the pilot. the second drop ship is after a suit case with major intel.

 

Once Hank's drop ship arrives at the building they board out and the drop ship flies off for now.

 

They soon reach a vault when York decided to hack it soon triggering an alarm. Once they got inside York went to the roof waiting as Hank pushed the crate full of bombs onto a window washer. They used Maine to counter balance it and the crate goes to the roof.

Soon enough the door busts open and Hank and Washington kills the guys, right after a guy with heavy armor and a flame thrower comes in pinning Hank and Washington in their cover. Hank soon threw a spear stabbing the guy in the face killing him.

 

The two head upstairs while at the bottom floor Maine is killing the people there. York set up a transmitter as they got surrounded. Hank and them dropped their weapons as some pushed the crate to the ledge.

Hank secretly contacts four seven niner as a missile fell from the sky killing most of the enemies and the crate is about to fall. Hank York and Washington ran for the crate and soon it fell and they jumped off. As the crate fell a portal opened up high above Cloudsdale during the competition.

 

 

The drop ship flies ahead of the crate as it was parallel with the crate. York and Washington slowed down as Hank grabbed the crate standing on it. The crate spun when Hank landed on it as the ponies could see it saying bomb/nuke on the side. As Hank and the crew was able to be seen from the ponies watching Hank gave a salute to them. Hank tries to line it up with the drop ship as two enemies came with jet packs and fought Hank. Hank removed one of their jet packs and tosses it to York, and he killed both of the enemies. Soon enough a third one came as the drop ship goes to a horizontal position as Hank jumped off the crate when the enemy shot.

 

Washington landed on it and fired back killing the enemy as York works the jetpack and pushes the crate with Washington into the drop ship.

 

 

four seven niner yells "hold on" to York and Washington as she changes the position of the thrusters. The ship is so close to hitting the ground and soon it took off back into the portal as it closes behind them. As soon the portal closes Hank got all his AIs back.

 

Hank is still free falling with his arms spread out to slow him down "i should have had a fall back plan." He barely past the audience.

 

 

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The ones holding the AI felt them leave as they got back to their main ship. York and Washington sighed as they all went to attention as the director looks at them all "where is Hank?" York speaks up "he is back in the dimension he was in. He is staying in a place called Ponyville."

the director thinks "how do you know"

York smiles "remember Delta, he told me. Also we left him free falling i hope he will be ok."

The director nods "he will be fine if he has some friends made which i am sure he does."

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Rainbow Dash was ready for the competition to begin, the crowd was full of anticipation.

Suddenly a large gasp was let out in unison as Hank plummeted to the ground in front of all the pegasi.

 

Rainbow Whirred around to see what was happening as she saw hank drop in front of her.

"i'm coming!" she yelled as she left of the clouds and tucked in her wings to start her dive.

 

She opened her wings to start gaining speed again, hank was now nearly one mile off the ground and closing in fast.

She flapped with all of her might, and her speed increased ten fold.

*CRACK!

The crowd watched wide eyed to see the newly formed sonic rainboom

Rainbow winced at the G forces her body was now put through, she flew closer to hank, 50, 20, 10 feet, Smack, she collided with him and caught him with a tremendous thud.

She opened her wings to slow there decent as they then gently touched the grass outside of town.

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Hank was really surprised hearing a loud CRACK as he saw Rainbow Dashing coming to get him. He looked really surprised at the sonic rainboom never seeing anything like that. Once they touched the ground, Hank gave her a big hug "thank you so much for saving me i owe you my life." he still hugs her as he removed his helmet "how can i ever repay you?"

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"alright you can let go ya big lug, it was no big deal" rainbow dash said sarcastically, "need to owe me anything, i'll just ask you for a solid later how is that?" rainbow dash changed her mind and smiled. "just don't go jumping without any wings next time alright?"


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Hank smiles nodding "yea i think i learned a big lesson there, also i saved everypony from what is a bomb." he smiles and rubs the back of his head. "that was amazing on what you did to save me.i really hope you won." he smiles "i hope i didn't interrupt it." he smiles "good luck..." he starts to walk off but he limps as a close realization was his foot is bleeding as it got shot.

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Pinkie came bounding up "hey hankie... OH MY GOODNESS!" she exclaimed.

"hey pinkie could you take care of hank?" rainbowdash said "not that i don't want to hang out, but i have a crowd of 2000 pegasi that want to know what just happened." she said with a wink as she sprung back into the air to go to cloudsdale.

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Hank smiles at Pinkie "hey can we go to the doctors i think i am starting to feel the pain of getting shot in the foot." he says as his tone of voice sounds like he is hurt. He slowly limps to the doctors as there is a blood trail behind him. "so pinkie why arent you watching?" he kept limping.


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