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"Rainbow Dash you've done it again!" shouted derpy hooves.

"yeah yeah" replied dash "let's get this thing started shall we?"

 

"ooh that looks bad" replied pinkie "good thing were almost there."

they continued to waddle along until they made it to the ward

"back again i see?" said the nurse at the counter "well at least this time you're in one piece"


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He gave a nod "yes we are back, and at least its only my foot and nothing else. Also i saved you all from a bomb." he smiles as the doctor came "Hank welcome back lets go fix that foot."

Hank nods as the doctor helped Hank and they remove the bullet and fixed the wound.

Hank comes out in his cloak as he had his armor removed and sent back to the Director.

"ok pinkie we can go now." he smiles "i hope Rainbow Dash will win."


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"why don't we go watch for ourselves?" pinkie asked as she skipped to the door "what are you waiting for? come on!"

they hurriedly made there way to twilight's where the massive purple air balloon was ready to make another voyage.

Twilight's head popped over the basket "what are you two waiting for? hop in!"

The balloon ascended quickly, and they made it in time for a few contestants before dash's run was up.


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Hank smiles glad he can see Rainbow Dash in the contest. Once he got in he is quite surprised on how fast the balloon went up. He looks at his foot making sure its ok and nothing happened to it as he watches the contestants glad he saved them all from dying. "Twilight i saved everypony here. The enemies of mine dropped a crate of bombs but my team brought it back to space in my dimension." He smiles "rainbow dash saved my life."


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" i heard she saved your life" twilight responded "and i'm..."

"There she is!!!!" pinkie interupted "rainbow dash is up!" now screaming in twilights ear.

rainbow dash now stood on the cloud in the center of the arena, awaiting the starting buzzer to begin her complex aerial combinations.


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Hank smiles at pinkie when she yelled. He soon looks at Rainbow Dash smiling as the buzzer sounds and she took off.

Hank had a surprise look on his face by what Rainbow Dash did. "Wow she is amazing." He watches her moves closely. "I am really glad i met you all and maybe later i can show you new members to the AI family." He smiles still


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Rainbow dash did a chain of twists, dives and loops, she had no reason to do a rainboom this time...

With each move she seemed to get more and more graceful. The complexity increased, the cheers roared. Nothing was going to stop her from taking first place. The clock counted down with 5 seconds left she got to the end of coliseum...then, she dashed forward, shot up into the air, locked her wings close to her side and flew 40 feet in an aerial twisting flip and landed smoothly on a cloud in front of the judges panel. The crowd went wild

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Hank claps as he had a really surprised look on his face. "Her moves are amazing." He still claps "i am glad she is one of my friends." He smiles still. "She kind of reminds me of the new recruit how in one mission became number two... I can compare both their moves together. Well i guess Rainbow Dash is getting first place. Oh i am surprised no pony actually thanked me for saving their lives."


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"she is something isn't she!?" said pinkie "oh i just know she's going to win... oh look they are announcing the winners"

the crowd holds their breath in unison, waiting for the big reveal.

"The winner is...Rainbow Dash!" exclaimed the announcer

The crowd erupted in cheer, stood up and applaused.

"I just knew she'd do it!" said pinkie and twilight.

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Hank smiles at Rainbow Dash giving a nod and claps "i knew she could do it. Can we go back on the ground i am starting to have a fear of being this high up in the air." he sighs as he watches Rainbow Dash "plus i need to get off this foot so i need to go lay down in Apple Jacks home."


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"no problem hank." said twilight

"okey dokey lokey" said pinkie pie

They descended quickly and landed near twilight's home.

"alright do you need any help getting home?" asked pinkie pie "or can you get there or find the way back easy enough?" she asked hank.


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He gave a smile "i know the way. Ill be fine." He starts to head to Apple Jack's place as he hums a song. It took him about one hour to get there, rather than 30 minutes. He gave a smile as he went to his room and sat on the bed as his AIs appeared. He noticed three new AIs

The three AIs smile

Gamma a light blue blurred AI with no voice who sounds like a robot speaks "im Gamma i represent lying and tricking."

The next one Iota speaks up " i am iota i represent honesty." Hank nods

The last one is Aeta who doesnt talk.

Hank smiles as the AIs vanish leaving Hank with his guitar and plays it while he sat on the bed.


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"well okey dokey, if you're sure you can get there" said pinkie "good night hank"

Hank departed from Pinkie and Twilight

"I'll bet he loved the show" pinkie said

"yeah i bet so too" twilight agreed

 

Rainbow dash trots down the road

"Hey guys! Did you see!? Look at this Medal!" rainbow dash says excitedly

"we are so proud of you dash!" said twilight

"man that is shiny" said pinkie.


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Hank dozed off on his bed as he woke up when the AIs started to talk in his mind. He groaned as he looked at his fott seeing it better and smiles heading back to Twilight Sparkle and Pinkie Pie "oh hey Rainbow Dash good job, i have some one here for you to meet." He smiles as Iota appears "hello." She says

Hank smiles "Iota represents honesty."


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"thanks hank!" rainbow dash said "i can't wait to put this baby in my living room!"

They continue there idle chatter for a bit, then Hank pulls out Lota

"hey there lota!" pinkie says..."it's really really nice to meet you"

"ah yes, hello" said twilight

"what's up?" said rainbow dash


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iota smiles "its really nice to meet you all personally. I can now see why Hank trusts you all, and i can believe what i saw in Hanks mind." She smiles "my brothers and sisters told me to tell you congrats on the medal you deserved it." Iota soon vanishes.

Hank smiles "the AI fragments are brothers and sisters. So is their anything planned today or will it be a lazy day? If there is nothing planned im going to go train."


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"nothing planned today for the event catagory" said pinkie "twilight has to finnish her studies, applejack has to work the orchards, Rainbowdash... is rainbow dash, and i have to deliver cakes!"

A moment passed between them

"well i guess we will see you around hank." said twilight as they all departed for their chores.


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Hank gave a nod as he headed to a wide open area as he made sure there are no ponies in his way. Delta appears "the usual?" Hnk nods as 30 green targets spun around him and he hit each one as his speed increased by 6% he did other crazy trainings like dodge the hologram sentry bullets and others. Once the moon was up Hank headed back to Apple Jack's place. Once he arrived he went to his room and took his cloak off and laied on the bed thinking to himself. "These ponies are so nice to me, its like we are a big family." He sighs when he said family "man i wish you were here sis." He says as he closes his eyes.


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The next morning was actually still for once... nobody was getting killed, not everyone's life was in danger. It felt good to get rest for once in the last few days.

Pinkie bounded out of bed down the stairs and out the door, she didn't know where she was going, but she felt like running carefree.

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Hank smiled waking up. He was glad today felt nice and calm, he felt like showing Iota to Apple Jack. But first, he pulls out his guitar as he writes a song. After he writes a song, he heads dowbstairs "hey Apple Jack i have someone for you to meet." Soon enough Iota appears again. "This is Iota she represents honesty. You two will get together fine." He smiles "you know Apple Jack you and your friends, it feels like we are a family. Why do you help me so much?"


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AppleJack looks to Iota "heya" she says then returns her conversation to hank

"Hank we are nice to you because that's what friendship is all about" she said "don't be ponderin' that anymore, you'll worry yourself sick" she said lightheartedly and looked back at Iota

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Hank nods "So friendship should really be like this, it feels like we are a family. I would have loved to call you all sisters." he smiles

Iota smiles "You know how i got to hank? Its because i was with his sister" Hank quickly seemed so happy "Shes alive?"

Iota nods "yup she can be coming here soon if all the ponies dont mind."

Hank smiles "man its been almost 5 years since i seen here, i wonder if she changed?" Iota nods "so Apple Jack, are you planning anything? Cause you could be able to see Hank train." once hank turned around there is also 11 chips with the mercenary logo on the back of his neck.


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"So when are we espectin' her?" asked apple jack "we don't mind but we need to know when she'll be stoppin' by"

"I think this calls for a party!" screamed pinkie as she jumped up into the air.

"calm down pinkie..."

"yeah i am excitable i guess, but that's who i am now that i think about it"

she begins hopping around again in circles.

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Hank smiles "well Iota said she will be here really soon." He seems really happy "i think we will need a party, i think you all will like her she is really nice." He smiles "she is here." He smiles as a portal opens up near them and a female walks through removing her hood as she looks around "they said Hank will be here." She sees Hank and she runs to him and hugs him. Hank hugs back "everypony meet my sister, Allison, she is so nice you will all like her. She knows everything i know." Allision bows and smiles "its nice to meet you all. Ive heard all about you all from Iota and how she described it made it sound amazing."


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"Howdy there Allison" Apple jack said, dipping her head.

"WOO! HI THERE!" Said pinkie quickly "I'll be right back!" she ran off

"uh pinki-"

she was already gone

"oh well, she's a hyper pony that is for sure." apple jack said returning her attention to the two. "you must be hanks sister?"

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