morethanicecream 116 September 4, 2012 Share September 4, 2012 So, I did a picture of Rainbow Dash. I know it isn't great, but I would like some feedback. My previous profile picture wasn't that great. This is my second drawing. I would like some constructive criticism. Thanks. P.S Is my text that I put a meme. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hazardus_Havard. 479 September 4, 2012 Share September 4, 2012 First off the image looks very squished together and that makes her look very off. If you look at her stomach it should go all the way lined up to the top, her second arm appearing behind the front shouldn't be attached to anything but appear behind her stomach/chest since it is on the other side of her body, much like the bottom leg is. Finally her wings should be attached near her shoulder blades, or just below the shoulders and in the middle of the backs location cause right now, they appear attached to her bottom. Practice makes perfect; but if nobody's perfect, why practice? http://hazardus-havard.deviantart.com/ Art http://www.fimfiction.net/story/70801/an-alien-walks-amongst-us Story Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
morethanicecream 116 September 4, 2012 Author Share September 4, 2012 First off the image looks very squished together and that makes her look very off. If you look at her stomach it should go all the way lined up to the top, her second arm appearing behind the front shouldn't be attached to anything but appear behind her stomach/chest since it is on the other side of her body, much like the bottom leg is. Finally her wings should be attached near her shoulder blades, or just below the shoulders and in the middle of the backs location cause right now, they appear attached to her bottom. Thanks for the criticism Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dusty Soul 2,611 September 4, 2012 Share September 4, 2012 It looks really squashed and her chest looks insanely big... Other then that the lines look ok, So I must say it is an ok drawing. Soundcloud-------------------Facebook---------------------------Youtube Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
morethanicecream 116 September 5, 2012 Author Share September 5, 2012 It looks really squashed and her chest looks insanely big... Other then that the lines look ok, So I must say it is an ok drawing. Thanks, for your opinion. I think I will try drawing a few more characters, just to get used to drawing. I haven't picked up a pencil for drawing for about 3 years. Wow, it has been that long. Is Spike an easy character to draw. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ApplejackRules 5 September 5, 2012 Share September 5, 2012 It's a pretty good picture and al,just you should have made her a little bit taller in everything so it would even it out to a perfect rainbowdash Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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