Hand Drawn OC for a friend (Second drawing)

[MachineDriven 17]

Fatty legs. I didn't notice them until after I outlined it ;_;

But besides the two right legs any other critiques? I tried a different pose then last time.

 

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Edited September 15, 2012 by MachineDriven

[Dr Pinkie Pie 21]

Really cool, I like it a lot except uhmmm, you outlined it? That's not as good (no offence) but still it look's really waesome and cool.

[Dusty Soul 2,611]

You outlined it, yeah that's ok. The mane looks WAY different then the original... Other then that it looks fine.

[MachineDriven 17]

Oh, I should clarify I was only using the reference for the body. She had her own mane and tail.

[Wubsie 1,123]

This looks pretty good.

The only thing that's off about it is the mane and legs, they seem a little off.

You should try smoothing out the lines a little more. Other than that it's pretty good.

[The Original 571]

What is it with people talking about outlines, i think this is cool, but seriously... OUTLINES? These are cartoon characters, of course they have outlines ./facepalm